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Acrostic *MarkSwimr* *Elfin* *Prince*

Acrostic  MarkSwimr Elfin Prince

MarkSwimr, an elfin prince
A Lord no Pixie need convince
Rides upon his dragonfly
Kingdoms below moon he often spies
Sword ready Pixies sing of him
Whom is a better Pixie friend
I know of none reminding when
My prince's heart love begets
Magically melts ice so wet
Royally he never us forgets.

Every elf should be so cool
Loving souls aren't taught in schools  
For his being compassionately forward,
In each case, Pixies applaud his awards
Never did MarkSwimr seek great rewards.

Prince of magic twinkling stars
Royal heart that goes so far
I salute all you mourn,
Never do you say how forlorn
Calling your heart so torn
E*mptying it to be reborn.

by Iohagh

Author notes

MarkSwimr has always been there for Pixies and never once said no and all he asked was a poem which I give from my heart's home. Go Mark Go Marky Go Swim. Yo Yo Yo. Ciao now.
Written January 6th, 2006

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  • Iohagh
    January 9, 2006
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    Markswimr I put your name on this poem to give you Pixie dust as anyone comments on the smell of your poem's bloom. Please contact Lepekaha about becoming one of Brokenpen's elfin warriors and then you can join this site and with him sing the song of Pixies. Pixies love the world. Your friend Ciao.


  • markswimr
    January 6, 2006
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    I added a link to this poem in my profile. My first link here.

  • markswimr
    January 6, 2006
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    SO Cool I am FLATTERED to say the least!!!!!!


  • Iohagh
    January 6, 2006
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    MarkSwimr is about 23 or so and his Mom has my same birthday as I and he is a gem of a catch for any Pixie on the flight as he looks down from the moon at night.
    Edited on Jan 06, 4:39 p.m. because ''.


  • metrophobiac
    January 6, 2006
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    Markswimmer...who is he?????? A mystery Elf to be sure....bring him on in....what a beautiful write!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Baroness...hope you dont mind i call you that......

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