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Acrostic *AlienGirl* *Rocks*

Acrostic AlienGirl Rocks

A pixie so new your youth always renews
Like a tree's heart is unlike its bark.
In your soul without hate love just awaits
Enter as flickering light, blowing into fire bright.
Neverland loves unicorn's too sitting on backs cool
Glowing wings alight shoo running together we two.
Love AlienGirl's dreams thereof. silly shoves and hugs.
Non fattening nudges, fudge and porridge without grudges.

Regretfully for us Pixies love rarely knows lust
Oh our feelings are just loving all we trust.
Can the sprites at night still try lassoing the moon
Keeping all her dreams of a wonderful life so soon.
She, AlienGirl, we Pixies cry her name in croon.

by Iohagh

Author notes

While flitting about and looking out, AlienGirl just popped out and I, as a Pixie scout, popped up with a shout. Hi and she Hi backed and the rest is gossip and Pixie tact.
Written January 6th, 2006

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  • Iohagh
    January 9, 2006
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    AlienGirl I put your name on this poem so you will get Pixie dust as anyone comments on the smell of your poem's flowers.


  • Entwining Beauty
    January 6, 2006
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    this is a treasure,excellent piece of poetry.


  • January 6, 2006
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    Thank you so much!


  • markswimr
    January 6, 2006
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    So this is interesting Are you going to publish your pixie collection? You keep me coming back to read more with the style changes you have, I enjoy that it makes for fun reading. Keep on writing but this time write about me...-laughing-


  • StoneLion
    January 6, 2006
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    I like the whimsy in this piece. Lots of fun to read, Cousin.

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