I've run out of words
Be they eloquent or abrasive
Since words no longer serve me
Please listen to my screams
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This came from totallic disatisfaction with my writing. I haven't really stopped, but I haven't begun to enjoy my work either.
Written January 5th, 2006
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Yes, indeed very powerfully stated. I know the feeling though. There are times when I get to the point that I can't write anymore and want to give up! But I don't, I just keep plugging away. You take care and keep the ink flowing! You'll find somethig to inspire you!
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that was really good but i hope you didn't really mean it write to express how you feel practice and it will be a habit.
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I know what you are talking about, im sure everyone says that, but i do seriously know, if you believe me or not is up to you, but i still like this, very short, and nice.
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Apparently, you had just enough words left. I've felt like this many times, but I never thought to make it a work in itself. Great poem!
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Powerful
Wow powerfully written, I would like to see another simular explaining later exactly what caused the feelings but very powerful in short words. Truely talented you are. -
This is short, though rather than take away from the poem it simply emphasises the meaning behind the lines. It's very effective and sad, I really liked this work.
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