I said goodbye with a tear of sorrow, which I hid with a fake smile after you playfully kissed my cheek.
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Yeah this one is random I know but hey hope you like it. Oh and by the way I agree with you with the "I love you". "I hope you get better Drake!"
Written January 5th, 2006
A contest entry
- So Much Meaning In One Little Phrase (contest) by ThisIsMyWonderland.
300 points, ended January 9, 2006, 36 entries
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Think there are a whole lot of people who can relate to the line you have entered in this contest... Well done, I wish you the best of luck!
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Did you mean rhyme? Well anyway naw I kinda have that line running throw my head for a while if you notice there is something a bit like this in the last "My Confessions II-Dear You". But thanks Peace out
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hmmm....C-chan I have an idea!! If you make such a short thing rhy I think it will be alot more apeling.....just a suggestion though. However, I do ike the playfullness of this which you have created.
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thats sweet. =D
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Thank you very much.
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Thanks.
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i think its a grand piece....you said something profound and leave the thoughts to provoke me...
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thank you for agreeing! hehe! amazing stuff right here, its amazing what people can do, and say in one simple sentece, thanks for enteing and good luck!
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