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Where Did The Time Go?

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Where Did Time go?
The children playing, running all around, laughter fills the air as the little ones chase the dog.  Everyone just sitting around waiting for the family dinner.
I ponder of a time not too far in the past when it was just me and my mom and my own dad.
You say to yourself, while giving Laura my new bride of five years a wink,
Where did time go?

The children are older now, and it seems as though the yesterdays just past right on by.
Watching the not so little one anymore, spinning a basketball.
The phone rings for your baby girl who isn’t a baby anymore and it’s a boy on the phone.
You say to yourself, and give Laura my wife of 15 years another wink,
Where did the time go?

You watch as your boy walks across the stage to receive his diploma,
Next year will be your daughters turn. Your youngest son walks over to you to give you a hug and asks to borrow the keys to your car. Your daughter asks if he can drop her at a friends house for the night.
You say to yourself, while winking at Laura my mate of 20 years,
Where did the time go?

Looking at your daughter how beautiful she is, as you walk her arm in arm down the aisle To be wed. You glance over at your handsome son, sitting there holding your lovely Grandchild .You may now kiss the bride, is all you hear along with some sniffling happy tears and I realize they are my own.
The limo pulls away and she goes off to her honey moon, as your son puts his hand on your shoulder. You look at him with sobering smile.
And say to yourself, while winking at his true love of 24 years
Where did the time go?

Sitting on the porch rocking in my chair, The brown has turned to gray in my hair, I watch the grandchildren playing with the dog they got a few months ago.
One of them looks up at me. Grandpa this dog sure has grown up quick. Where did the time go?
And I just smile and laugh in that Grandpa way. With glistening eyes I say while giving a him hug. and winking at Laura again after 30 years
Time is right here my child. Time is right here.


Then I give him that granpa funny face that alway's made them all giggle.

                       


Author notes

For those of us that have family's to reflect on what they have, and be gratful for what they will have. Havent we all asked orselves, Where Has Time gone? For all those that are too young to have family's to remember these days of your family unity. For all those just beginning their family's to remember these present day's, cherish them and hold them close to your hearts and never forget the good times.
Written January 5th, 2006

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  • Reba
    June 27
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    Wonderful....I just hope that this generation takes the time for each other and know the importance of traditions, celebrations and special times that can be passed down. My children had it...will theirs? No more letters of thank you to the grandmas...too busy..they have no idea how the simple manners are being cast aside. What will be important to them???

    Reba Parks


  • stella187
    December 1, 2008
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    Yes we may remember the past, but all we really have now is the now

  • stella187
    December 1, 2008
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    All we have is the now.


  • Talking Toni gold member
    June 28, 2008

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    Profound!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    As I read this it made relize I have alot of letting go to prepare for,this is my daughter's senior year coming up this fall and It has been her and I for soooo long and I cannot imagine life being the same without her under my thumb...lol..if you will, But I know now how my mother felt the day I moved out and I know my daughter will be living on campus at college. I will be signing u for lots of hobby classes..lol..Thanks for this precious recounting of your family and the best to you and your wife and extended family...sounds like you are a very lucky man...Great Job!!!~~Toni~~


  • Mel-the-Believer
    August 21, 2007

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    This was great, I mean really great. I loved it. Wonderfully written. Thank you so much for entering this contest. God Bless!


  • xCandieKissesx
    August 5, 2007
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    Great write! I love the imagery and description. The flow and rythym was awesome! I think it was fantastic in my opinion! We all do take time for granted. 1 minute we are young children, the next we are getting Married! I love this poem. I am very glad you entered! This is personally one of my favourites. Bravo! Good luck in the contest!
    Jackie ♥


  • jinglingjoy
    March 15, 2007

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    lovincharmer

    now I understand how u came by your handle - you are indeed a lovin charmer. and i mean that in the very best way. This piece is wonderful. Full of warmth, laughter, caring, loyalty, family unity, heritage, pride, and all that stuff that one sees so seldom. unashamed out for display and to say this is me/us, and we're proud of it. I felt honored to be allowed to glimpse in through the window at the love and memories you shared in ths way. thank you. you have been Blessed and bless others in sharing yourself.

    jingle

  • JM Kenyon silver member
    November 8, 2006
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    Very wonderful write. I do imagine what will be of my children and their families and such things.. somehow, I do not set thoughts into play about what my husband and I will be like in the furture. We have taken these years one day at a time, not knowing where we as a couple are going... or if we are going anywhere at all.

    What we do do is take advantage of sweet times, easy times, times and times to remember as little treasures. Something I hae come to learn is that reeality is neer as good as a dream and so making a dream that can marr family seems folly.

    So, when I am the lady version of the old man up there, these simple things in this write will indeed be the sweetest dreams eeer playing through my mind. That plain, aderage, boring life that most families aim for will be a fantastic accomplishment then . Great wire. s and best wishes alwas... ~Genie~


  • grannyeri gold member
    June 3, 2006
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    Wish this were written in poetic form - lovely sentiments, just looks more like prose in paragraphs, than poetic verses. Cute picture. Good pictures can really make a difference. Congratulations on your win.


  • Pollycheck
    June 1, 2006
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    Thumbs Up

    Very good. And I love the grandpa face. Thank you for entering my contest and good luck. I can tell this is going to be a rough one to judge, there are so many good entries already.


  • Glenda L Hand
    April 6, 2006
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    I am giving you honorable mention for my contest. This is an excellent poem, just as a prewrite it didn't fit the contest as well as it could. Very good poem though.


  • Glenda L Hand
    April 6, 2006
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    Thank you so much for your entry. The picture made me laugh. I will be judging in just a little while.


  • doughjoe silver member
    March 13, 2006
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    this is an awesome piece of poetry in show here this is a lovely piece of father time come true love this work and thanks for sharing it !!!!!

  • poetyaknoit
    February 14, 2006
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    Very nice, best of luck in the contest. Keep on writing, ~TC


  • LovinCharmer gold member
    January 16, 2006
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    Thank you for reading and hopefully getting some enjoyment out of it.

  • Pome
    January 16, 2006
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    Congratulations on your trophy in the contest! -Pome


  • Mr Doug
    January 16, 2006
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    Life's memories - - yesterday - last week - last year - last century - - the mind and the heart are so filled with smiles and tears - -but remember you bet - vividly - - thanks for sharing your well written past

    Mr. Doug


  • misticmoonlite gold member
    January 10, 2006
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    Hi Andy Sweety, thank you for entering this quite memorable post, Love the sentamentality, and love of your children and grandchildren in this post is so very unique, in the way it is presented, thank goodness we have wbiro to help judge and make the decisions, I know I am honest in judging and usually not partial, but one never knows when they see some one they love get involved in our contest, I very much appreciate you and all
    that do and have entered , wishing all the best of luck..
    keep that smile on your face..
    I love you too!/ Linda


  • jasminerose
    January 9, 2006
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    Congratulations!!! I really enjoyed this piece because I have 4 children and often ask myself that very same question.. wonderfully written and well deserving of a trophy!! Great entry!!Jasmine

  • Brokenpen
    January 7, 2006
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    another awesome write

    time does have its moments of just speeding bye. hey this is a great write. thank you for sharing your words with me. well done and keep on writing. love it.
    Edited on Jan 07, 7:23 p.m. because ''.


  • poet2angels gold member
    January 7, 2006
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    A beautiful poem and the pic is adorable!....Thank you so much for entering this lovely poem ..It really makes one take a look around and think....."where did the time go?"....Good luck in the contest!!!...Lynda


  • masterblaster gold member
    January 7, 2006
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    Hi, time , it goes so quickly, sometimes I would love to be able tostop itjust for a little while, lovely poem, great feel and so human,this is a super write, a big hug Di

  • Bexter
    January 7, 2006
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    amazing

    wow! this is be ond amazing! keep up the good work!!!


  • Mybeautyisfake
    January 7, 2006
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    very interesting. I am not a grandparent. Not even a parent. But by reading that I understand what parents are going through. And how hard it is to watch someone grow up so fast. Nice job. Iwishyou the best of luck with everything in life..</3

  • KrayZ-2
    January 7, 2006
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    I'm not a grandparent yet,better not be...but,i know that exact thought -n- feeling behind it...i have 2 lil' mini-me's and they aren't so little any more...time flys when yoour havin' fun,and your poem is absolutely excellent .....

  • Aldo the great
    January 7, 2006
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    bah humbug

    this poem for me kind of brings out remorse mixed with humour,
    its kind of like being at a clowns funeral i suppose,
    but seriousely I loved this poem
    i thought it was extremely well written
    so well done
    thanx
    prehaps i'll here from you again soon
    but for now i bid you adue


  • becks place
    January 7, 2006
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    I liked the way you illustrated the passage of time by using common life milestones. This was a soft, and nostalgic write that is quite thought evoking. Sure to send every reader down their personal memory lane. I liked this one a lot...and the pic you used def nice touch! Great stuff here!

  • RagTack
    January 7, 2006
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    I like the softness of this poem. time march in tomorrow I havn't make rocking chair yet still Mountain biking with the grandkids in the Blink of the eyes they will have children of their own,maybe then. A nice work, memorable


  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    January 7, 2006
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    well it is a truth of the life which has been presented here with a crescendo of the moments of the philosophy of the life through and through.The beauty of the write lies in its concepts which has been made to catch the essence of the life just in few lines and that way the effort of the poet is just a great success. The description of the write is very touchy and very deeply depciting the story of this life again and again.The strongness of the subjct is making a milestone in the list of the poems on AP.It is really an impressive work and also a agreat job to bring the such a wonderful work.prabhudayal khattar


  • Token
    January 7, 2006
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    Great

    This is a very nice poem. I ask myself where the time has gone all the time. I think back all the time to the days where i was like 3 or 4 years old. I may be only 17 and some people say that i'm too young to reminice but i still do and i wish i could go back to the times i was 3 or 4 years old. Well keep up the good work.

  • Shepherdess
    January 7, 2006
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    very beautiful touching piece
    great write


  • iced-rose
    January 7, 2006
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    very beautiful touching and moving if I do say so myself. I am already beginning to wonder where the time went. My daughter is 5 months old now and I feel like it was just yesterday that I held her for the very first time. Beautiful write...

  • Mouse Poet
    January 7, 2006
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    I do like this. It does bring warm memories to light. Nicely done.


  • shattered-dreams-xx
    January 7, 2006
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    wow this is soo deep and i know how this would feel , even if im only 15 becuz im really close ot my mom and dad, grandma and grandpa, etc. and we all talk... and wow im sooo reading this to my parents!!!! this truly sent shivers thru the whole thing!!!! amazing write the best ive seen all day!!!!! awwesome job i love it!!!

    -casey


  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    January 6, 2006
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    As my youngest is graduating high school in June, I have to sit back and ask myself exactly this question..sigh...seems but yesterday she was a newborn I very much enjoyed reading this! It's awesomely written! And I love that picture at the end; kinda looks like me when i wake up in the morning Thank you for sharing this!


  • Tarja
    January 6, 2006
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    wow this is wonderful. amazing job at this poem. it made me laugh a little! i'm 17 years old and i've noticed even though i'm very young, the older i get, time is going by so fast.. i can't imagine being 50! lol/
    great poem! loved it!
    amanda


  • DreameeDarlin2U
    January 6, 2006
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    Bravo!!!!!! Love it, Love it! My kids are growing so fast. And this Christmas when I looked at my parents....they looked so old. It made me sad though remebering all the good things in the past...I miss them. Anyways, excellent I applaud you!

  • piccola silver member
    January 6, 2006
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    When I look in the mirror I ask myself the same thing..it seems to have just flown. Yesterday I was ... well nevermind all that. But this was a great read.


  • spamwitch
    January 6, 2006
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    I've been thinking on this subject a lot lately, I am in my 30's and I have nieces having babies!!! I have like 9 great nieces and nephews now! I used to change these girls diapers! This was a great piece that truly has me reflecting. The picture is hysterical too! I did not expect that at all!

  • GirlWithBrownEyes
    January 6, 2006
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    Can I cry?This is soo sad but very beautiful and heartfelt.It's touching and I love it very much!Great write and keep up the awesome work!

    *Rose

  • Big Hearted one
    January 6, 2006
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    this poem was just so beautiful and it makes you realise just how short life is in fact one day youre a new born baby the next day your old and grey and on your deathbed my advice would be to cherish everyday you have with your loved ones cause you never when it might be your last and make the most of the life God gives you. a most beautiful and thankyou for sharing.


    ps.
    that picture of the old man is hilarious roflmao


  • lonely and free
    January 6, 2006
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    Yes I know how you feel. But time goes to your loved ones and that is right. So smile and let go for beauty is passing love on. Lovely poem and lovely imagery x


  • martinezjjoe
    January 6, 2006
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    beautiful

    I loved this poem creates an excellent picture of life and how it can easily escape through our fingers.


  • Dawrion Darklinmoon
    January 6, 2006
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    loved it, great, good, yay, ok get my point .

    eoncore! i loved this! That is in fact a good question where did the time go?, -claps- I like how its gives the idea of spending time with friends and family before it has run out, The pictures helped too!


  • moonwick
    January 6, 2006
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    Excellent food for thought, my friend. Quite right, you are! Keep up the awesome job and good luck in all you do!


  • Abby100 Mann
    January 6, 2006
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    This is a beautiful piece of poem that gives the reader clues about time and commitment to family.Great flow and use of illustrative imageries to make this piece unique to all the readers.


  • grannyeri gold member
    January 6, 2006
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    The picture is priceless - do you look like this? Time does seem to pass too quickly, and waits for no one. Liked this look at family life through the years.


  • walking in the rain
    January 6, 2006
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    Fabulous!

    Very awesome write! I like your style of writing-very open and a lot of good emotion. Thanks for sharing it with us!


  • King Muhaha
    January 6, 2006
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    * * * * * Starz!

    HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!! eoncore! i liked this!


  • Tigeress68
    January 6, 2006
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    brilliant,wellwritten

    Well Done LovinCharmer this is a great poem!!I love this title and all the pictures they are great.Well done again.Good Job
    Tigeress68-Jessica


  • Hellspawn666
    January 6, 2006
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    If you ask me is like a rocking chair >It gives you something to worry about but doesnt get you anywhere.


  • LovinCharmer gold member
    January 6, 2006
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    Thanks So much for your critique, I revised that line so it would make more sense. "I" was meant to be first person singular, but it just didn't turn out that way and didn't flow as I thought it would. Thanks again for the heads up. Andy


  • Breaking The Girl
    January 6, 2006
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    This was beautiful, your emotion was very evident in your poem, as well as your talent, as a writer. One thing though, the first word of the third line, might wanna check it... Thanks for sharing though!
    -Amanda

  • Ir.muse
    January 6, 2006
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    This is a great wonderful very true piece.I enjoyed reading it a lot.
    Shahrzad


  • misticmoonlite gold member
    January 5, 2006
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    Such wonderful memories, you must have of your wife and children, and now grandchildren, you demonstrated you love very nicely for your family, hope to see much more like this here from you Andy..
    keep penning..
    mistic moonlite


  • Msmeka514
    January 5, 2006
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    Awww...this is so touching...I really love this. Our kids does grow up so fast. I have 2 girls of my own and i can still remember when they was babies. Time really flies, but i'm enjoying every moment of them...This is a great write, keep it up.

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