A moon of power,
Shining high above all else,
Glowing like gold in the night sky,
Even when it is silver to the normal eye.
The moon reminds me,
It inspires me,
It shows me,
But most of all it calls me.
I feel as though I should go there,
I feel i should find a way,
I feel as though it is my home,
But I don't want to be there.
It beckons me to go there,
I beckon not,
And now,
I am alone again caught in a full moon trance.
Goodbye my mind,
Hello my new home,
And goodbye to the life I knew,
Everything ends.
Author notes
well, this is what i see when i look at the pic. enjoy.
Written January 5th, 2006
A contest entry
- Picture Inspiration #7 by Utok Bulinaw.
300 points, ended January 8, 2006, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Great!
Wow! Once again, you have taken a topic that I have been talking about, not about wanting to go there or anything, but the moon in general...It seems to call us, and I so wonder if there is any truth to how people act when there's a full moon up there, I sure know lately, it seems crazy, and the moon is full, but I for one try to enjoy it, no matter the shape or size, as long as it's glowing, cool!
Thanks again my friend,
well done, I really liked this one!
-Timothy The Poetic Weaver~
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This is a very unique interpretation of the picture. I like the line "I am alone again caught in a full moon trance" Thank you for entering and best wishes in the contest! Eris
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lol angel......actually I get more applause for my critique then my poems do......guess you can call me the poetic critiquer.....so its been said....any way...good luck in the contest....
Malabu -
interesting comment, i like it though, sounds like the lines of a poem itself when you read the way i do. anyway, your right, it does get the effect on people alot of time sand everything. cya.
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and a lovely picture to see.......if it was not the man in the moon like they say.......id be there too......that is if the moon was a she.......He he.....lol......but with all the poems and writings about the moon........one could think.....when it glows and shines on us at night.....the beauty and awe of it brings us to our most inner thoughts....of where we would love to be.....when we see........it shines most brightly.....for all to see....
wonderful thoughts of beauty
Malabu
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