Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read • Contests • Groups • Learn • Forums • Store • Help
 

Stoned

Falling down
Smashing hard
Into the rock solid ground
Slipping and sliding
Crying and crying
Everything’s dying
From deep inside
The dark place where you hide
You swallow your pride
Just wishing you’d died
No place to go now
You’re stuck on your own
This is when
You start to get stoned

Author notes


Written January 5th, 2006

What did you think

    I plan to revise this poem: please leave constructive criticism!
    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    • Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)