Will you kiss me darling?
If I ask you to
Will you take my lips
With their soft rosy hue
Will your lips meet mine
Devouring tender skin
When teeth and tongue collide
Would it be a sin
As you inhale my sultry breath
Will you swallow sighs
As you caress my lips
Would you look into my eyes
Will your heartbeat race
When you pull me near
Can I count on you
Will you kiss me dear?
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Will you kiss me dear?
Can I count on you
When you pull me near
Will your heartbeat race
Would you look into my eyes
As you caress my lips
Will you swallow sighs
As you inhale my sultry breath
Would it be a sin
When teeth and tongue collide
Devouring tender skin
Will your lips meet mine
With their soft rosy hue
Will you take my lips
If I ask you to
Will you kiss me darling?
In a list
A contest entry
- I want a poem - it can be about anything, but I want it to be readable backwards and forwards. What by DayDreamer.
90 points, ended August 14, 2002, 4 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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How charming!
This beautifully romantic little gem of a poem is excellently structured and presented. -
"Will you swallow sighs
As you caress my lips"
whooooo, that is one of the best lines I have EVER read! It's just so.....romantic! This is an excellent piece!
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Thank you everyone.
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Wow, this is really good. I tried to come up with something for this challenge and was stumped. Way to go on the win, this was a challenging one,
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This is so tender...perfect write.
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very excellent job! congrats!
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Excellent work. Stayed together both ways.
Thanx for sharing -
Thank you DayDreamer. I really enjoyed this challenge. It was more work then most, but it was fun. I’m flattered, that I won.
Patti -
I really liked this poem - it had great meaning, rythem, and it was brilliant forwards and backwards. :) Good win.
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I'm glad you liked it. It's was a lot harder to write a poem for this challange then I expected. (Well... and have it make some sense anyway. LOL)
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:)I like it.It's so romantic,and exactly how a kiss should be.I like how you expressed it in words.Nice write!
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