Hurt, by the inhumanity
of it all;
The lies and deception,
broken promises said
knowingly, that they would
melt in the dust;
Why do these falsehoods
hurt so much, when from
past experiences happen
on a regular pattern;
A little truth would achieve
respect, even though one
never expects even that;
Disappointment eats away
the loving bond between
parent and child, leaving
only a sour taste;
Where did it all start to
decay...where does the
blame fall;
Soul searching just causes
doubt, where as instinct
points to the hub of the
matter;
Perhaps, one asks themselves,
if we had dealt differently.....
who knows...who will ever know
the depths of despair felt by
a mother..
for her child.
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Written January 5th, 2006
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Many thanks jenna..how many is that I have to reply to? lol...it is appreciated
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Wow. I enjoy this a lot. I'd never really looked at it that way, but I find the perspective intriguing.
Great write, thanks for sharing it.
Love and light,
Jenna -
Thank you Rose for your kindness
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Many thanks for your kind words
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It was written with regards to on going years between mother and child rather than those troubled years of "Teen" years. I sometimes think that those teen years never end
Thank you for your comments, as always they are appreciated
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Is this written about the teen aged years, when young people try to find themselves, who they are and their own identity, or mother and child at any age? Interesting perspective on this subject.
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hmmm, pretty nice. Sad, but, sometimes true. shows emotion, and it's a good wright. good job.
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You're absolutely right.No one can know how a mother longs for her child, that's part of being a mother.Great write.
*Rose -
Thank you ..I appreciate your kindness
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I liked this, a lot. I loved it actually. It's so real, but told with such beautiful words. My favorite part, well the one that really reached out and grabbed me was:
"Where did it all start to
decay...where does the
blame fall;
Soul searching just causes
doubt, where as instinct
points to the hub of the
matter; "
That was so powerful.
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Thank you for your kind comments
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I agree, what a broad range of relationships this covers. But your words ring truth. Sad thing is....it seems we all know it, yet we do nothing about it. Fantastic write, thanks for sharing.
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How true ;(..Ah, such is life my friend Many thanks for your kindness, it is appreciated
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To me this could be extended to cover just about every social relationship there is. When, with a little respect, it could be so much easier for everyone we seem to prefer to screw up everything with dishonesty and then institute a lot of stupid rules to make us do what we should do anyway.
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