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My Old Man Eyes



I want to wake
at three AM
and find you beside me
just once.
I want to place
gentle kisses
upon your breast
while the night is dark
and we're alone.
I want the passion
your youth gives me
the freedom
to be young again.

Old man dreams
the boy inside
begs to come out
Old man dreams
seen only
in my mind
but as vivid
as the gleam
in your eyes
as real
as the warmth
of your body.

Old man dreams
only for a moment
a moment in time
to feel the warmth of youth
to feel your body
against mine
just once
with passion
that was lost
so long ago.

Author notes

Some love is taboo no matter what you feel or want... yet, we feel the emotion, the fire and wish for it anyway.
Written January 5th, 2006

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  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    January 22, 2006
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    Wow. I can't believe I didn't see this write before. There is a lot of emotion written here. But my friend, I don't think that passion was lost. It is still in you, and I believe it always will be. Excellent work here. ~StormGoddes

  • moonlite wonder
    January 5, 2006
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    great and good luck in the contest.
    love, Tara

  • Kinky Lil Devil
    January 5, 2006
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    I really love this one as i told you before this is so going on my fav list ^^