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Enslave me.


Falling,
Lifeless and withered,
Silenced and bruised,

Enslave me,
Take me,
I’ll barely notice
You exist.

Failing,
Convicted and scarred,
Emanating fear from this turmoil.

Enslave me,
Beat me,
Will I care?
Intensity has washed away,
You can’t do anything worse to me.

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I still have to edit this. It's not very good, just some ideas.
Written January 5th, 2006

A contest entry

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