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I Hope

I hope you surf the waves in from
the ocean, big and small.
I hope you watch the sunset.

I hope you sing a song to all the angels,
loud and clear.
I hope you'll always try new things,
never going in to fear.

I hope you fall in love,
with the one who makes you world go
round. I hope that if you fall out,
your feet stay on the ground.

I hope that you can understand
that true love waits for you.
That you may have wait awhile,
but when it comes it will be true.

I hope you feel the sand
hot on your toes on summer's days.
I hope you learn that sandals
help keep the pain away.

Author notes

This is about a girl wishing for hope on her love life
Written January 5th, 2006

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  • RalphL
    January 5, 2006
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    Totally on it

    You've done it again how beautifully you write at a moments notice and not a script in sight. Like I said before and I'll say it again once more, you definitely strike me deep, right down to the core. Of you I wish to learn more, will you be my friend and show me some more. LOL xoxo