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InLove

This feeling overwhelms me
A swelling of The heart
I never truly thought I would be
This happy at the start.

You take me by the hand
And lead me by the heart
Over a beach of sand
Through the grasses that we part.

With you I let go
Of intuition and sound mind
My feelings I cannot help but show
To a person who is so kind.

You kiss my lips so tender
Embrace me through the night
To you I have surrendered
Myself so hold on tight.

So strongl you hold my hand
whisper softly in my ear
I really feel that you understand
Everything you hear.

I lose myself in you
This close I have never been
These feelings are so new
To have a lover who is my friend.

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please read my poem and hope u like it alot thanks
Written January 5th, 2006

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  • Precious jewel
    June 12, 2006
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    its beautiful tiffany!! keep it up!!
    lylas
    amber


  • I Am The Nightmare
    January 10, 2006
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    great

    awwww hey tifferz I love this poem it is sooooo good!!! keep up the great work!
    X_Tiffany_X

  • RalphL
    January 5, 2006
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    I can't say it enough you are awesome and I think I'll put you on my favorites love to see your book lol

  • RalphL
    January 5, 2006
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    Priceless

    You have awesome flow and and I'm speechless and would like to know how do you do that what you know. I n your your heart I can see what true love needs to be.

  • RalphL
    January 5, 2006
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    Priceless

    Super

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