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Kamikaze Fate

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~_ \\/ _~ Rangolius Vectre

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  • RangoliusVectre
    January 30, 2006
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    yea, i try to capitalize stuff when i can. or on things i find more important. im glad you liked it though. thanks for all the comments as well. me and ria are doing alot better now. just having some slight problems finding ways to talk to each other, being so far apart. but when we do talk i know she loves me back.


  • Shantalina
    January 19, 2006
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    Wow, This has a lot of emotion. I think it would make it a lot stronger if you did the capitalization and punctuation. It also would make it a little easier to read. Other than that this poem was great! I really liked it. Your style is very different, but I like it very very much. Good day to you, and again, good luck with Ria.

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