Baby I love you,
for everything you are.
For your past mistakes,
and for your future ones too.
You're my heart,
and I'm not going anywhere.
I will wait til the day you come home,
and can hold me in your arms.
You're my other half,
what makes my heart complete.
I need you just as much,
you're my strength to keep going.
I don't want you to be so afraid,
of telling me what you go through.
Of course I'm going to worry,
but that's because I love you.
I tell you everything,
the good and the bad.
We'll get through our problems together,
because in my eyes you're perfect.
Author notes
I got 3 letters from Dustin today. He's so afraid that I'm going to leave him. His letters made me cry. I understand, yeah, he's locked up, he goes through a lot, and he has problems with the way he deals with things... but so do I. We'll work together, and get through this.
Written January 4th, 2006
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wow, this has alot of emotion, and it is a very good wright. I read your latest contest you had up, and I'm deeply sorry that you can't be with you fiance, I'm in the same situation, but my fiance is only in another state with his parents. Being seperated is really hard, and I can really relate to this poem. it was a very good wright and if I had applauds left I would applaud it, good job! i really liked this
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this is such a sweet poem with pure emotion flowing through it. i just love how well you pour your heart out in everything that you write. its like i get to know you better everyrime i a read a new poem. love you
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As happy as I am for you...I worry. You can't put all of yourself into a boy...you do have other things to entertain your mind,don't you? Don't get me wrong,I do believe that love can overcome any obstacles,but what if there was no more and you were to live this life without him? Could you? You gotta have more,Lala. Your friends,your school,your future....it ain't all about him,ya know. What about you?
Okay,sorry....ranting again,being the grown-up sucks! Just be careful and be you.
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Deena
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i like this it's rele rele good . . . . i like the emotion
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Love isn't about finding the perfect person
It's about seeing an imperfect person....
Perfectly.
And this comes through wonderfully in your poem. keep writing! -
This is totally right, real love right here. And it's really sweet!
I thought the flow was very good, and the words you choose showed the emotion perfectly. Awesome job, keep up the great work!
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wow, this has a really cool flow to it, i like it.
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This is a lovely poem and a wonderful messege of love.
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I like this poem. You can really feel your love for him, and your understand and patience, its a great poem.
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Thank you sis. I mean, so far, no our relationship isn't fairytale, I can't see him, or hear him, and the only way we have of getting to one another is letters, but I'm still happy, and still so very much inlove. He's a cutter, and deals with a lot like I do, and even worse. I'm all he's got, his faith and I are that keeps him going each day, and he's said that to me so many times. I just want to give him everything that he deserves and to prove to him that not everybody gives up on him, because I never will... he never gave up on me I hope you too, can one day feel the love and emotion I did. Sometimes it's right under your nose. Took me 3 years to fall inlove, and a lot of heartache and getting fucked over, to see that he's indeed my soul mate, and my future husband
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Now this is TRUE LOVE to look past the imperfections, or even see them and find such deep love and compassion for that person. God I only pray for a love like this sis, I am so proud and happy for you. The more I read, the more I see, that you both are soulmates
... I thought I found that once, but he turned into a toad, and I truly hope that Dustin is your Prince Charming and that you two get the fairytale ending that you undoubtablly deserve
Love you
Sara Dawn
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This is so sweet. It must be so hard for you knowing what he is going through in there. Your a good woman for staying by him. That in it self is awesome. Then we get to the poem. It is so real. Not the normal o'h I love you blah blah blah. I had a guy I was with for 4 years on and off (The off was when he was in jail) It was always hard to near about things going on in his head. I hope all goes the way you hope. Excellent job and keep up the good work!!
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aww babe love will get u through it and u will both b fine. hang in there and keep writing sweety. love kat xx
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Very sweet what you have written as a tender little reminder to Justin how deep your love actually is for him hunny
wonderfully done
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I can relate so deeply to this. Brent always thinks I'm getting "bored" or "tired" of him. I don't understand it. It's amazing how when a man is in love he is... seriously a bigger baby than we could ever be! Great peom! You are very talented!
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this is such a wonderful poem. i think dustin is really going to love this poem if you send it to him. you get your emotions across so well i love your writings.
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Oh wow..i can relate to this poem. My bf and I have problems too but the best thing to do is to communicate with each other face to face...no running...to avoiding each other...you all need to sit...talk and try and solve your problems and listen to what both of you have to say...even if it is something that you dont want to hear. Always be honest too..always helps in the process of trying to reconcile. I see my bf as perfect...in my eyes he is..and just like your bf is perfect in yours...thats part of why I can relate so much to this. This a great write, keep your work up. -
this is wonderfully inspiring! way to stand up for your man and show him the truth! *sometimes it just takes guys a little longer!*
but lovely poem!
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