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let me stand next to your fire

i love your heat
the way you make my heart so warm
the way you held me
the way i am torn
i want to know
all that you feel
that maybe you love me
that maybe
those arms around me were real
i love your heat
the way it felt, my leg, your knee
i wished that would never end
but desks moved
and i walked around the other bend
i tilted my head
and looked out the window
in all the classes you were gone
i love your heat
i love the way you look at me
and the way you look away
when i see you stare
i love your heat
your soulful words
the ones that make me laugh
the ones that make me cry
i love them all
i wish to never tell them goodbye
i love your heat
when you are next to me
i can barly breathe
it is like a spell
you have over me
i can't help
but feel this way
i can't help
but love you
and need you to stay
*i love your heat*
now...
"let me stand next to your fire"

Author notes

yay i love jimmy hendrix...but i love who this is about more!!!!!!!
Written January 4th, 2006

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  • She burns
    March 6, 2006
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    Sweet and lovely

    This is just so sweet and lovely,creative and full of hope,its like a beautiful song,simple and very sweet,Just so beautiful
    Keep on writing,your amazing


  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    January 4, 2006
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    Very very nice! Whomever this was written for should feel honored! Thank you for sharing! Good luck in the contest