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dear my drummer

to my drummer,
   i want you to know
all that i feel
how your beat makes me real
how all summer long
i thought of you
how maybe you loved me
maybe it was true
how when i saw you
the first day of school
my heart sang out loud
you were the brightest in the crowd
how while i was with him
all i thought about was you
how you were with her
how i needed it to be though
when we both were single
i wanted to go for you
i wanted you so bad
how everyday i was looking for clues
why you always picked the same gym
how you made my rules
how that one day
your knee touched my leg
it kept me warm-
it kept me the hottest i have ever been
how your eyes
when you asked how i was
shined
and kept me weak
in need
i need you
i love the sparkle in your eye
i love you
i have so much pride
   i want you to know
that i am growing to love you
love you so much
how i want you so close
can't help but touch
i remember today
when you sat close to me
oh so close to me
and i want to kiss you
hold you
tell you all the thoughts in my mind
i love you
you drummer
keep me in your mind

                      truly,
                         you are loved

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Written January 4th, 2006

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  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    January 4, 2006
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    Another very nice sharing of your love for this one who has obviously touched your heart! Love it! Thanks again for sharing your poetic verse; it's very nice!