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Take me with you?

I want you to know
I'm yours

to break
to heal
to hold...

let me always be there
my joy is of no consequence
yours

is everything

I'll belong to you
just never leave me behind...
so when u go...

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Author notes

this isn't really anything...i just wanted to write it down
Written January 4th, 2006

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  • Broken barbie
    February 14, 2006
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    I really like this.


  • staticgrace
    January 6, 2006
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    Honest and Lovely

    This is really sweet! Profound feelings, simply described. Great work! xx


  • BlooQKazoo
    January 5, 2006
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    i LOVE it! especially the ending, that was really good. its sweet, and short and basically very good, i like it very very much! aw keep at it hun, love you!
    polly xxxxxx


  • mia.bell
    January 4, 2006
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    I like it its very interesting...Great write and Happy new year