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Yin and Yang




To know my lov
e

is to know what I would do

to you and for you. I would travel

the world searching for the perfect rose,

stand and fight, protect you at all costs. I would

shelter you with my loving embrace, kiss away your

tears and comfort your soul. I would lay down each

night and satisfy your every desire, taking you to new

heights of pleasure never known before.I would pluck

the stars from the sky lay them upon a platter of gold

trimmed in diamonds if it were your heart's desire. In

the morning, I awake you with the most gentle kisses

and in the night send you to dream with the deepest

passions you've ever known. Never would I let a day

pass without a whispered “I love you”. I give

you my all, all of me....mind, body heart

and soul.Without you, I am incomplete.

Like yin and yang, you are the

other half of my soul.

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genre: love/personal

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  • Bedroom Eyes
    July 9, 2007

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    This is beautiful Bel! I think this is the first piece of love poetry I've seen from you, and I really like it.

    Love the way you've combined to colors to form the sign too. A strong of genius

    Wonderfully done!


  • maa gold member
    March 18, 2007

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    wow, this is so impressing ... no idea how you did it, but the result is stunning, both esthetically and essentially ... brava !


  • PerfectImperfection
    February 21, 2007

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    Such a beautiful piece. Excellent form and flow throughout this touching and heart felt write. Good luck to you in the contest!


  • Lyre-Bird-
    February 20, 2007

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    Firstly I would like to thank you for entering the contest!!!!!

    secondly I wish you the best of luck with your creative entry!!!!!!!


    Tracey!!!!!!!!!


  • riccadeana
    February 18, 2007
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    This is absolutely awesome!!!!


  • misticmoonlite gold member
    June 26, 2006
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    very nice form for this post, great flow and shows the desires,
    you would feel , very nice entry, thank you..
    Linda


  • sjgaither
    March 14, 2006
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    Impressive poem! Loved the style!


  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    January 21, 2006
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    Beautifully awesome, sister!


  • nichtmich silver member
    January 5, 2006
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    24KT Poem

    The poetry and that fantastic form are absolutely amazing. You got the shape pretty darned good and with the added effect of colours you have an eyecatching and beautiful read. I doubt you'll need it, but good luck in the contest


  • DD Sai
    January 5, 2006
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    Dude that is so creative what you did with the yin and yang! I love it lol. Great job with the poem also.

  • AnubisAnkh
    January 5, 2006
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    Wow truely great poem, you obviously love this person very much.
    And may i also comment on the beautiful layout as a Ying and yang. Very nice.
    Keep writing
    Good luck

    x Colette x


  • Blushfulmoon silver member
    January 4, 2006
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    e

    A very beautiful poem for someone that you love.....
    I love the yin and yang shape also how did you get the red and white words to go that way.....I am jealous
    This was beautiful
    Loved it
    Hugs
    Susan~~~


  • Iohagh
    January 4, 2006
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    You are creating new art forms that are ying/yang.


  • Sunkissedrose
    January 4, 2006
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    First off, this was an amazing work. I enjoyed the flow and the feel of the piece. Secondly, how'd you change the color like that? I am still in awe of just how perfect this is.

    ~Carrie


  • January 4, 2006
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    THIS POEM ROCKS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! this is so far the best poem i read yet you are a true poet this was such a great poem and it was good about love to and I liked how you write it out this was one very impressive piece of work and good luck in the contest i surely think you will win .


  • Scotlass
    January 4, 2006
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    Lovely

    Beautifully written and presented - Great work.


  • Shadows of wolves
    January 4, 2006
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    I love the use of color and the whole conmcept that you wre trying to capture

    you did it in grand style

    Pen on

    Wolf

  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    January 4, 2006
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    My dear sister, this is a most beautiful sharing! Loved this, I did! You write your heart in your writes and I love it! Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest


  • -Kayleigh-
    January 4, 2006
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    Really Sweet!!!!

    Wow this was a really great write, I liked it alot!!!! It's very sweet and deep and full of emotions. Excellent work!!!! I love the picture and stuff that goes with the poem also. But this write really remindes me of my relationship, and that's exactly what I'm looking for. This poem is just so sweet, I love it!!!! Thanks for entering my contest and best of luck! BB


  • Celticmoon
    January 4, 2006
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    I am glad you enjoyed this piece.
    I have a few other pieces of shape poetry in this very same collection if you care to have a look.

    I thank you much for your very kind words.

  • Celticmoon
    January 4, 2006
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    lol I'm still working on that.....lol

    Getting the colors placed right was tough enough....LMAO

    But I thank you much for the notation of that
    I'm glad you liked this piece.


  • Dawrion Darklinmoon
    January 4, 2006
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    loved it, great, good, yay, ok get my point .

    I dont know what I loved more the colors, the style or the picture it self within the words, or how it said so simply and fully that " I love you" , deffently want to see this more offten!


  • Wild Mustang
    January 4, 2006
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    The yin yang shape was, like, perfect. It's also a beautiful poem. Good job! Keep up the good work.
    P.S. the only thing you forgot were the two round dots in the shape !
    Edited on Jan 04, 3:44 p.m. because ''.

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