The way you touched me,
The way your hand slided down my waist,
The way you faced,
My toughest fears,
I'll never forget,
Those three long years.
Tragic everything became,
Our relationship felt terrible,
Without anyone to blame,
My life turned upside down,
Upside-down without you.
I tried to get you back,
My trying was all black,
As black as my eyes,
Filled with tears,
Crying because I lost you.
I want you back in my life,
I want to be your lovely wedded wife,
I want us to live together,
Happily,
And forever.
But I know that will never be,
I know I will never see,
Never get to see that day.
Author notes
Written January 4th, 2006
A contest entry
- Are You My Future? by Heavenly Angel.
300 points, ended January 5, 2006, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - {{Doctor, Doctor Let Me Die}} -♥- by PaiigeBARBIE.
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i love this.
it makes me think of what happened to me
love it dollie!
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GREAT POEM
SO VERY SAD, BUT AN EXCELLENT POEM. LOVED IT, AND KNOW JUST HOW YOU FEEL. I HAVE WALKED DOWN THAT ROAD, MY SISTER FRIEND.TAKE CARE & GOD BLESS'.LOVE, SHIRLEY ANN SHAW-RAYTOWN,MO.....
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The tragedy of a lost love well expressed in your words
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aw.
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hm.
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good poem
I like this poem every much.
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I think the colors fine. But this comment box is to comment on the poem (which I will) not the colors. I loved this!
It is dark, sad, and has a bit to do with love. Not like other poems which are like " I hate you I wish you'd died for dumping me" or " Your blood will mix with mine when.. blah blah blah. That is the kind of thing that dark love poetry should be. Great work. I loved this, keep writing.
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I know how you feel, keep writing
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ok well babe you need to change teh fount color for one...lol cant read a thing...
Yeah it sucks when happily ever after doesnt come true its really sad but most get over it i hope things are going better
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its bloody hard to read with such similar colour tones.... cant see fuk - lol - tj
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Awwww how very sad this is! I am sorry that you are going through such obvious pain!
Thank you for sharing this with me, though; I very much wish you the best
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