As I inhale and exhale, I put my words in use
Not because I like to brag, but to let you know the truth
within all the things I ever have, you are the most precious
My chocolate brown sugar, my sweet delicious
I never thought anyone could reach within my depths
A stranger from afar who slowly makes my heart melt
Without using any magical spell
I hear at distant the ring of the big old bell
I freely follow the long forgotten trails
All the things that rejuvenate my heart I find
From the sound of a guitar to a violin, I dance
One step at a time just to not fall off of track
For you I smile and sing, oh Kattieyanna, oh Kattieyanna
You are my God angel sent, oh Kattieyanna, Oh Kattieyanna
My words are not wise enough to explain
How quickly my heart is falling for you in plain
My feelings are far too deep to express
The weight of happiness that I treasure
Whether it's in height, dimension or distance,
I can't seem to measure
My love for you will always be a no contest
Thus, shall it be forever
Beauty is indeed in the eyes of the beholder
As I gaze deep within the soul of your eyes I find
A wonderful place for me to find happiness and shelter
For years to come as I watch the magical skylight
Within the fragrance of love I smell the scent of a woman
Softer than the petal of a rose; caressing by butterflies and bees
I find me a place I do belong, home where the heart is
Therefore, I want to be your everything, from your soul mate to your man
Too bad I don't have the power to grant any wishes
But darling, I do wish you a birthday that is so extraordinary
Even after the years to come, you should keep on benefiting
For my wish was made at love purest serene
Happy Birthday
Kattieyanna
Yours truly,
Mackintoch
Author notes
Written January 4th, 2006
MACKIE
OR
MACKINTOCH
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I realy liked this one. Especialy your use of thus. Its a word very few people use now and i like it
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awwwwww you sound so in love!
lol
thanks for entering! -
wow i see that you really love this Kattieyanna
i especially love the lines
All the things that rejuvenate my heart I find
From the sound of a guitar to a violin, I dance
One step at a time just to not fall off of track
For you I smile and sing, oh Kattieyanna, oh Kattieyanna
beautiful,
amazing write love,
thanks for entering and good luck!
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Just like the last one!
I thought it was really good, like Kattieyanna III (I think it was) that I just read not too long ago! It was sweet and had a nice flow. Great job! Thanks for entering -good luck! -
Beautiful
I love that this is a birthday poem. Very sweet and beautiful imagery. I did find the rhyme and grammar a little off key in some lines such as
One step at a time just to not fall off of track
There's too many words, maybe take out the of.
and this line
I hear at distant the ring of the big old bell
should be in the distance?
Overall very lovely sentimental write and a truly magnificent birthday gift!
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Very Beautiful. Nice write. It almost reminds me of that scene in Westside Story. Anyway, thanks for entering.
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This one goes back a ways, and has such lovely sentiments that are well expressed in these lines.
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This is such a sweet and heartfelt piece filled with a wish that is wrapped in love and joy...a beautiful treasure indeed.
Thank you for the comments..take care~ -
Love it
Devastatingly romantic! That's one lucky lady! I especially like this part:
I find me a place I do belong, home where the heart is
Good write! -
BEAUTIFUL
wow--i like this as much as the lll one. i am going to read the next one now. i like it too because my name is viyanna--i like the name kattieyanna. it is so very sweet. like what you write for her. she must be one heck of a lady.
How quickly my heart is falling for you in plain/ in should be is -
very beautiful tribute for her birthdy, how special she must be to you, to have writen this lovely poem.
...For you I smile and sing, oh Kattieanna, oh Kattieanna
You are my God angel sent, oh Kathianna, Oh Kattieanna
i can hear this ever so softly, in the way a lover whispers...just so beautiful.
Edited on Jan 05, 6:19 because ''.
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