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My Friendly Hate

I cant believe those words you said why is everything going through my head
  Spilling all secrets
Feeling like Ive lost
       EVERYTHING to live for but here I stand before you down and depressed but I know that me losing you was the best Damn thing I could of hoped & Dreamed of
 I thought you were the most helpful but I just realized your HURTFUL




TO: A FRIEND I THOUGHT I had

FROM: Shorty-Who is dead to you NOW






12/26/05-8:07pm

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This is to a friend that I thought was the GREATEST>> But I guess not
Written January 4th, 2006

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  • Bigmike69
    January 5, 2006
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    this seems like something that i have heard a lot of recently, unfortunately i am the person that you would hate if i were to be the person in this poem. good luck, have fun, and may the stars shine with the beauty of a thousand suns when you are looking at them, good poem by the way


  • eternalpoet
    January 5, 2006
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    4 Stars ****

    hey desarae....seems a friend has been bad to you.. ... well i can relate to such incident.. i had a friend, he started talking stuffs on my back.. and i got angry enough to smack him down.. ... we are no longer friends, but now he doesnt dare to talk bad on my back either .... there are times when we make wrong decision in selecting friends.. but then with time we will come to know if our decision was right or wrong... like you came to know that your friend was not helpful but hurtful... i am always here for you my sweetheart

    take cares and have a nice time my dear friend.... just keep it up... your humble little friend.... .... .... ..... - vic ( who else? )


  • MrsDobbins
    January 4, 2006
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    holy shit sis!!! i totally know this feeling! you have a friend who you think is gonna keep their mouth shut about certain things and it turns out a week later the whole schools nothing but lies about you!!! i totally know this feeling!!!
    Great Write
    love ya sis
    missy


  • aRdNeK
    January 4, 2006
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    I know the feeling of losing a friend that you think is the greatest. But sometimes, like in my case, it's for the best. Very powerful, emotional, and descriptive write. Keep up the amazing work!


  • Lost-Rose-Petal
    January 4, 2006
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    Wow this is amazing!! I have sooooo many poems like this!!! My boyfriend who i was absolutely deeply in love with...cheated on me with my best friend (at the time)...she convinced him that she loved him more and told him a whole bunch of lies about me to get him to leave me for her.....and he did it....but you know what....she cheated on him and ruined his life....serves him...now he wants me back and i have found another who is now my fiancee.....things always turrn out good in the end...no matter how many obsticals you have to go through.....i love this poem! it has soo much emotion to it and more than just you can relate to it! keep writing!
    MINDIE @---^---


  • DreameeDarlin2U
    January 4, 2006
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    very bitter and your emotions pour out in this short piece. Better days are ahead, keep your chin up!

  • Ir.muse
    January 4, 2006
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    oh!sooooo sad.
    Wish you happy days.
    Shahrzad

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