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For a friend

I was lost and alone, a long time ago
Bitter betrayals still fresh in my mind
I resolved to bare my feelings no more
Never thought a true friend I'd ever find

And then you came along, like a fresh breeze
Turned my world around with your goofy smile
With you alone, I feel totally at ease
Knowing that, for me, you'll walk that extra mile

I want you to know, I care just as much
And for you I'll fight until my last breath
I may not find the words to say it as such
But you are the only true friend I've ever met


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Written January 4th, 2006

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  • nobodys-girl
    March 25, 2007

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    this is so awesome! it sounds like you have a really good friend. kinda reminds me how my best friend. awesome poem, good luck, and thankyou for entering!

  • meena krish
    January 8, 2006
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    This write is heartfelt and sincere it touches my heart. There is nothing like having a best friend who brightens one's life..lovely write. Good luck in the contest..take care~


  • anoetic poet
    January 4, 2006
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    Thanks a lot!


  • melodramatic emo
    January 4, 2006
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    beautiful

    wow that was incredible just wow if this was truely inspired by a friend then they are lucky to have you I loved it honestly that was wonderful good luck and great job take care *MJB*