In the realm of the vampire,
One rules all,
He has his close friends and family,
But he lets no one in.
He rages a war,
He did not start,
A lychon tries to claim his thrown,
And he refuses to yield anything to him.
This lychon was his ally,
Always helping,
Always scheming,
But in the end,
He was learning they're weaknesses.
He commands a vampiric army,
assigned by the king himself,
But in the end,
He appointed himself to turn them,
Turn them against they're king.
If they turn on him,
He can kill them in an instant,
With a flick of his hand,
They fall in front of him.
He rages a war for 30,000 years,
And in the end,
He doesn't come out victorious,
But a mortal over powers both at once,
A human nonetheless.
This human had no reason to interfere,
But he saw an opportunity,
And now controls the vampiric army,
And may soon wield the thrown.
This human is weak,
This human is useless,
This human has no powers,
But he overcame the most powerful of foes,
How?
He walked right up to the front door,
walked in,
No one stopped him,
Because mortals are weak.
He claimed the thrown with surprise,
He slain the king when he slept,
Protected by a race who kill all in they're way,
Slain by the weakest of the warriors imaginable.
The most powerful vampiric army ever,
Is now run by the weakest of beings,
And slaughters all in his way.
Author notes
yeah, mortals suck, no offense to anyone who might take it. truthfully, this was a bullshit move, but there will be a time for those who know.
Written January 4th, 2006
A contest entry
- A Twist of Fate by McIntosh1985.
300 points, ended January 14, 2006, 11 entries
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Aww that was very good. I know I shouldn't of said aww.. because yeah it's not an "aww" kind of poem! But it's kind of ironic that a human would control a vampiric army! I really do like it very much!!! Thank you for commenting on my poem "Entwined." it means alot to me!
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Awesome!
A topic I just am drawn too, and I'm glad I came acrossed this piece for sure, I'm a big fan of Vampires..I can't wait for the Underworld movie to come out, heehee!
I think it's going to be even better.
We'll see, I sure hope so! 
Thanks for sharing, great job once again my new friend, pen on, and keep up the great works!
-Timothy The Poetic Weaver~
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yeah dude this might be confusing to anyone who doesnt know but i honestly think that its pretty awsome and the mortal human taking the thrown would piss so many people off im glad its just a poem
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wow... who is the lycan? or maybe i already know?
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