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Minds like lovers



If we kissed
with lips that never before touched
with eyes closed
would we feel the passion of youth
would the warmth of love
melt the years between us
would we once again feel the wonder
of  innocent lust
lost long ago.
I want to feel again
I want to need again
the touch of a lovers skin
the warmth of her mouth
and the desire of her heart.
We may just be passing
passing on to somewhere else
but for just this moment
can we pretend it is real
imagine the soft kisses
of lovers
and lay together in our minds
one more time.

You make me want these things
once again
and once again
I know I cannot have them.

Author notes

Time goes by sometimes without notice
Written January 4th, 2006

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  • Petroushka
    January 7, 2006
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    Hmmmmmmmmm, sounds like we're in the same kind of boat here. this was a great read and it put many of the things I feel right out there. A classy yet passionate piece. Good job.

  • amused
    January 6, 2006
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    Fantastic read. I love this poem. I must say though that you *can have these things. Wishing you all the best. I really enjoyed reading you.


  • shimmer
    January 4, 2006
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    this is more then just touching, it really pulls at the heartstrings. i would say this was a great write, but that would be an understatement. i really do love this.

  • Kinky Lil Devil
    January 4, 2006
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    aw you can have them *gives you a giant hug and kiss* nice job on the poem i love it