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The Desert

A full moon mounts the vacuous sky
Washed in blood red fire
The desert night holds its breath
Lost in suppressed desire

You cross the desiccated sand
Clothed in lupine skin
Your finely chiseled face - reflects
A knowing wolfish grin

Mesmeric voice that captivates
Whispered yearnings calling me
I am bound by your resolve
Captured - by your untamed plea

Candles leap to life around me
Clothes - vanish at your touch
Shadows dance thru sienna eyes
As you enslave me in your clutch

Warm lips spawn an appetite
Breasts - blossom for your fingers
Moisture washes over thighs
The scent of passion lingers

You breathe the air, inhaling me
And sip my honeyed hide
Then stripped, on knees, you cover me
The wolf won’t be denied

The thirsty godforsaken land
Trembles at our lust
And I’m consumed by cacoethes
With every savage thrust

I wreath as you impale me
Bay at your conquering growl
We die - and live again
Echoing ecstasy’s howl

Time shatters - as the waterless ground
Greedily drinks love’s flow
Till an oasis springs forth
And, flowers start to grow



Patricia Gibson-Little

Author notes

After all the wonderful submissions I read I hesitated to add this one.  I hope it falls within your specs.
Written June 25th, 2002

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  • Ellis gold member
    November 3, 2005
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    Eaten by a wolf HORRORS!

    Ho, ho, ho.
    That wolf did things that I don't grasp or know.
    Does what you did require a bib to catch the described flow?
    I think I will avoid wolves everywhere I go!
    From now on I'll be prone to not let my skin show.

    Ellis


  • bluesquirrel silver member
    October 30, 2005
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    very nicely done

    I like this a lot, great atmosphere and feel.

  • --Blue--
    July 11, 2004
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    Nice work here. You did a good job with the imagery. The way you described it all, it really did make it easy for me to see it. Nice job, and thanks for entering.

  • darkestlight
    June 27, 2004
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    ANOTHER great read, i couldnt take my eyes off of it as i read, as if the words were made out of metals and my eyes were turned to magnits! I love the imagry it this and how in the end u and the wolf man make an oasis, with flowers, that has to be my fave stanza


  • J Rhys Davies
    February 25, 2004
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    Holy Toledo! This was an intense read. I must admit that I was completely captivated by this one the whole way through! Excellent write!

  • wicceblanc
    July 11, 2002
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    I enjoyed this poem immensely. You can invision the whole seen as you read. It is like having your own daydreams on paper. Congratulations on a job well done.


  • AngelSeeker silver member
    June 29, 2002
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    Thank you Lurie... In light of all the wonderful submissions I'm very flattered to have been picked as runner-up.

    Patti


  • Lurie
    June 25, 2002
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    Oh it definatlty falls within my specs!

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