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Last Good bye.

Before he takes her heart
And rips it to shreds
He tells her that he loves her
And Kisses her on the head

He says his last good byes
Her eyes fill up with tears
Is everything he told her
Just one big lie?

The love she thought they had,
Was it real or was it fake.
How could he leave her,
With no explanation,
Just "we must".

She turns her head and walks away.
She mustn't let him see her cry,
Because there is nothing beautiful
About running mascara.

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Written January 3rd, 2006

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  • Wolf Demon Goddess
    July 28, 2006
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    really good wright keep up the good work
    Genna

  • candyecane2002
    May 10, 2006
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    i cannot believe i haven't commented on this... i've read it loads of times. anyways. i love you and this is awesome. me and the best guy ive ever had just broke up last night and im not doing 'good' at all. i hate it so much cheyna... im about to just bawl RIGHT NOW. he says i wasn't in love with him... but if he only knew. *sigh* i love him more than everything. anyways... let me leave you alone. xoxo

  • AMEgirly
    March 4, 2006
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    aww this is so sad! but so very good!

  • Grisly Bear
    February 10, 2006
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    good 'un. Really sad tho, lol.


  • -jme-
    January 4, 2006
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    awe great poem used from my quote


  • Shannon62875
    January 3, 2006
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    awww this is so sad... i dont know what to say i felt a lot of emotions.. you did a great job writing this!

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