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Conflicting Signals

Sensory Overload
conflicting signals
borrowed hearts
unwelcomed feelings
or were they wanted thrills?

Put your make up on
hide your red eyes
you haven't been crying
you just had fun last night
or was it both?

That kiss
sent your heart racing
that touch
sent your body screaming
was it good enough?

That's it, whore
do it again
let *him* use you
but don't let him see you cry
Slut, you were smiling, weren't you?

Those conflicting signals
slowing your heartbeat
you were too easy
but you enjoyed it
and you know your a whore now, don't you?


~Look at those conflicting signals, shining so bright in her eyes~

Author notes

grr, felt good to type that.
Written January 3rd, 2006

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  • no1special
    February 5, 2006
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    you are not a slut!
    I love you and he is an ass ...
    Dont regret the things you do just learn from them
    I love you
    xox


  • Decorus Somnium
    January 14, 2006
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    You're really great writer!I've read some of your works and all ROCK!This one is deffinatly great poem...just keep writing!
    Best Wishes
    ~LostMermaid~

  • bleedingarms
    January 6, 2006
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    thanks!

  • Volst Conundrum
    January 6, 2006
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    u really know how to put across a strong points..all 21 hats off ter ye...

  • bleedingarms
    January 6, 2006
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    Heh, thanks sweetie.


  • MisJudged
    January 5, 2006
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    wow, this is awesome

  • bleedingarms
    January 4, 2006
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    Thanks so much. I'll be doing okay. Take care. ~Kiersten~


  • Without-A-Reason
    January 3, 2006
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    wow rele like this poem it makes u rele think and i love poems that make me think i hope ur ok though great write keep it up

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