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God's Love

I love God and He loves me
Died for me upon the tree
All who call upon His name
Will be saved and Heaven gain

Ellis

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"God's Love" by prettypoet17
Written January 3rd, 2006

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  • eviscerated
    December 6, 2008

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    It's a nice concept, however I think that your rhymes sound a little too forced and this causes your poem to lack the literary punch its capable of.

    That's just my opinion of course.


  • Sharcu silver member
    January 5, 2006
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    Hey, awesome work. It's short and to the point. I've heard the saying before "died upon that tree".... some song... but I forget what off the top of my head. Anyways, awesome work! Good luck in the contest. Btw, read rule number 2. You are suppose to read one of my poems. I'm glad you read one of the other contestants poems which is recommended, but ya... you're suppose to read one of my poems. Keep up the great work!
    --Tim


  • HannahBrookeXD
    January 4, 2006
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    it ok

    I like the concept... but the ryming isn't the best. it s a little corny.


  • lies-n-pain
    January 3, 2006
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    once again!!! excellent! lol