how could you
you said you thought no one cared
and no one loved you anymore
did you forget about me?
do you even remember I'm still here?
I will always love you
no matter what happens
even though I had to move
and you had to leave
and we don' see much of each other
I am still here for you
I always have been
and I don't understand why
~chorus~
this isn't like you
why?
you are cared for
I am here
I wont leave again
just come back
I miss you so much
How could you leave
You were my best friend
My mother...
you know all that has happened
you were always there
and now your not
did you forget i needed you?
we helped each other
we were always there for each other
what where you thinking
when you took those pills
do you remember??
do you??
~chorus X~
now your not coming back
never
but why would you do this
leave me without warning
you can't come back
I could have helped
why???
Author notes
this is dedicated to my mother who committed suicide... on new years no less....ummm its option 5
Written January 3rd, 2006
A contest entry
- First contest ever!! come on in by smilingshadow.
302 points, ended June 1, 2006, 26 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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I am so sorry to hear about your mother..I hope you find the strength in your self to move forward ..my prayers go out to you and your family ..you pour out your emotions in your words and it's almost as though I can hear you ..thankyou for sharing such a personal piece
and goodluck in my contest
best wishes
smilingshadow -
I'm sorry to hear about this. I hope you are fine now. Your poem is really good. Well done and keep up the good work.
Good luck in the contest
~~sealover~~ -
wow this is a good song i like it a lot but i'm so so so sorry about your lost. If need to talk im me on here.
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I'm very sorry to hear about your mother, stay strong sweetie!! you did an excellent job with this poem, good luck in the contest, and keep writing!!!
-Brandi
SeductiveWhispers -
beautiful poem. i am sorry that you have had that hurt in your life. I will pray for you... thanks for entering.. you need to read every poem for the contest though... rememebr to do that because you will have to vote...
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That's interesting
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oh man, i am so sorry to hear about this. What can i say? Surely a comment doesn't hold a candle to your tears of sorrow. This is such a great song and its reality as well. Makes a change from reading plain old love songs as well. But to hear that happened....well i hope everything goes well for you this year.
michael
xx -
loved it
awww im so so so to hear about this baby 
the jackass
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awe sis this poem is os sad, and i am sorry for the loss of your mother. I havent talked to you in a while, and thought i'd drop by, but now i sad, this is very touching and a tear lays upon my check. :hugs:
-pasti -
wow i'm so sorry about your mother. it must have been hard on you. i hope you're ok. i'm sure she loved you a lot. i'm really sorry. well i like this. it's sad. well good job!
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