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Help Me

Talk to me
Fill me in
All this pride
It’s such a sin
I want to help
I want to try
To see you now
Just makes me cry
Trust me now
Ill help you thru
Cuz right about now
I need your help too

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Written October 4th, 2005

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  • victoria Secret
    January 5, 2006
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    Short & sweet my friend. Very nice flow. *Tori*