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Number One


We all make friends,
Good, great, forever
So I don’t see why we all
Can’t just stick together
I miss all of the great times we had
Some of them good and some of them bad
I miss all the fun
All the laughter the tears
The way we held on
For all those long years
And I don’t know how
We can keep on this way
I know I for one
Have so much left to say
I wish for one second
Things were back to the same
That we would never fight
And play these silly little games
It’s not the same without you
It just seems so unreal
I wish I could tell you
How I really feel
So please don’t be mad
Cuz you’re the best friend
That I’ve ever had
But now this must be done
And I just want you to know
You’re still my number one

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Written October 3rd, 2005

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  • wastedtears01
    January 3, 2006
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    i love it.Not just the rhyme scheme and stuff..but the message. Definately hits home. Especially in this world called high school. I think highschool is more than just to learn about random history and pointless math (sorry if you like math haha) ... its to get us emotionally strong enough for anything. people can be real jerks...anyway im done rambling. haha. great write!!

    -wastedtears


  • January 3, 2006
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    excellent

    That is amazing. I love the rhyme sequence. It has a nice flow and is a beautiful message that many people would love to hear. Beautiful execution and a pleasure to read.
    luvya
    Bel-