Warrior.
I saw him sleeping in the grass.
One hand under his head,
other hand over the silvery
sword.
Embargo.
Handsome, but only a human being.
My wings soared above him,
Oh, it could be so nice to kiss him
but by the rules I could lost my wings
if the human being see me
before the night.
Rules.
I want to hide my wings, I want to change the rules.
How that could be, may I lead him to my world
of love and magical light?
My heart was beating, my pixies dust floating
over his face.
Rules are here to be broken.
Blue bells.
I took his sword and bury it into the
deepest volcano.
Covered his eyes with flower's petals.
Then
I found nice place
to hide myself under the blue bells
to wait for nigh.
Awaking.
He saw me there
and my sparkling light
and my wings
and my blue eyes,
asking me about his sword.
New weapon
I put left hand over my chest
I show him my heart,
and my breasts blossomed
for him.
Sing with birds, wind, water and stars.
Song for winter, summer, springtime and fall
but he cannot hear my voice.
Love
I knew that he would be curious.
He touched my shimmery wings,
he kissed my breasts
and my lips.
My hairs like octopus embraced his shoulders
honey from my inner beauty poisoned his will.
He is mine.
Now we are singing together.
You can still see me there
dancing for him between the grass.
He is still mortal
and wounded by my love.
I am still Pixie.
Author notes
BT: allpoetry.com/Contest/1842381
Written January 3rd, 2006
In a list
A contest entry
- Fantasy Love!!!!Please enter!!!!!!!!! by Patience15.
300 points, ended March 10, 2006, 12 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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i loved this poem, i'd like copy it to my blog.:
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Thank you HADA.
~Sonja~
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Thank you very much kryspin.
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I liked the pace and tempo of this. also the style. I'm not sure what to say to describe the impact, but this deserved to place
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Thank you Emily. I will do my best
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I absolutely adored it.It was so beautiful how the pixie and human came together.I truely think you are talented and i hope you keep creatin such beautiful poems.
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Sonja 2
This is my chart because judging was killing me.
Joy 18
Love 15
Wonder 20
Whimsy 20
Style 16
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You go Pixie Mommy.
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Loved this - absolutely fantastic...
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Thank you my dear friend for so nice comment. Your words worth a gold for me.
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Aww this is such beautiful fantasy poem, your tenderness and warm heart speaks outloud to the reader from this piece..very creative , powerful write ..great job and good luck my sweet friend
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I was thinking about contest like this one and I had a poem in my head. When you start it, I was ready to post it. When I will have less lack of English language knowldge, I probably will have more poems or stories like this one. I am glad you like it.
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SONJA! This write really suprised me......the use of "Warrior" "embargo". This, i dont know if i have ever read anything by you quite like this....this carries alot of strength.....i am really impressed by the feel..........Bekah
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Thank you my bro for your pixiest comment. Peace, love, good health and pixies dust will follow you on your path...
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It's not about breaking all rules universe-switcher, LOL, but it would be nice to change some. I am not anarchist, I am pixie
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Thank you celtic - anglel for your time and for your magic dust over my poetry. As I see, you have a wings too...Share a peace and love.
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Thank you brokenpen /hm, you must fix it up with pixies magic force / Pixies are here to share love and to share the words.
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Sister you are a princess of pixification and I love your work.
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very pixieish indeed. you deserve to be a pixie. here come my favorite lines: Rules.
I want to hide my wings, I want to change the rules. Rules are here to be broken. though i'd say rules are there to be broken not here. very well done, the whole poem is about breaking rules and laws and things like that. good job.
xx
universe-switcher
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such a fantasic poem the imagination in this is amazing.so peacful to read the words just float just amazing i thing i have said that once great no sorry pure beauty and i wish you all the best in the contest.
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awesome write
wow this is an amazing write.. loving and so sweet. great write. thank you for sharing your words with me. and good luck in the contest. -
Thank you Puppy. If you sometimes have a feeling that you can fly with pixies, come and be our elf
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Thank you from my pixies heart.
Oooops. Shhhhhhhh, do not say to anybody, but you have the same magic force
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A TRULY BEAUTIFUL AND TENDER POEM
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Now that is a Pixie poem Mommy. You knocked it out of the park. I asked Lepekaha to judge you because I am so in love with you I cannot be fair and don't want to be. You are my Mommy truly in this write and I love you and it totally. Ciao now. Winking out. Poof.
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