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Sleeping Giant

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A sleeping giant is about to awaken
As we obliviously go about our daily lives
And when it does, it will make us reflect fondly
On all the diseases we suffer from today.
War, famine, pestilence, hunger.
They will all be rendered meaningless
When the giant fully awakes.

How important will the problems of this world be
Without a world to live in?

The giant has already stirred in Asia.
A tsunami that claimed 250,000 lives.
Two hundred and fifty thousand.

He has stirred in Alaska
Where the ice caps have melted so much,
Polar bears can no longer complete a journey
They have been making for thousands of years.

He has stirred in Africa
Where wildfires burn for months
Over desertified land.

He has stirred in the Amazon rainforest
Where naked tribesmen fight tractors with spears,
Trying to preserve what's left of their ancient home.

He has stirred in our own backyard,
And we named it Katrina.

When our grabbing is over,
When there is nothing left to plunder,
When the giant is awake,
We will wistfully long for the day
When AIDS, terrorism and nuclear war
Were all we had to worry about.

To the giant, it will be nothing personal,
Though it probably should be.
The earth has survived
Meteor showers, great floods,
Ice ages and cataclysmic eruptions.
She will surely survive us
And begin to heal
After the cancer is destroyed.


"Nothing will be left.  Nothing in the air, nothing on the land, nothing in the seas.  All will be hunted down.  All destroyed."  - Leonardo Da Vinci






















Author notes

If you can spare $19.95 a month, please join Greenpeace as a monthly supporter at www.greenpeace.org/international/supportus and become a member of the second superpower - World Opinion. If this poem comes to pass, you will at least be able to tell your grandchildren that you did your part to try to prevent it.

Did you know that eating red meat is one of the main causes of rainforest destruction? Please read on -

"Cattle ranching is a major cause of rainforest destruction in Central and South America. Ranchers slash and burn rainforests to grow grass pasture for cattle. Once the cattle have grazed sufficiently, they are slaughtered and exported to industrialized countries, including the United States, to be made into fast food hamburgers and frozen meat products. It has been estimated that for every quarter pound hamburger made from rainforest cattle, fifty-five square feet of rainforest was cleared—an area equal to the size of a small kitchen.

"Industrial society has tended to see forests as free sources of valuable materials or as needless woods, occupying land and getting 'in the way' of development. As a result of these pressures, every second the planet loses another two football fields of its precious rainforest cloak.

Our consumer culture takes a heavy toll on the environment. Although the impacts are not always immediately apparent, all products come from the Earth and must return to it in one form or another. Americans consume 40 percent of the world's gasoline and more paper, steel, aluminum, energy, water, and meat per capita than any other society on the planet.

The activities of multinational corporations, particularly resource extraction corporations involved in mining, oil drilling, and logging, are one of the leading causes of rainforest destruction. Even when these activities aren't directly responsible for large-scale rainforest destruction, they create the infrastructure (such as roads) that opens the way for the degradation of forest areas."

( From www.rainforestweb.org )
Written January 3rd, 2006

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  • grannyeri gold member
    February 21, 2006
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    Such an informative write with those photos. Congratulations on winning silver with this write. Well done.
  • TwoBoo
    February 16, 2006
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    a powerful poem..... we all to often sit back in our comfortable recliners and watch such news being told... we watch news of the hungry and while watching this we complain there is to much fat on the steak and the vegies are over cooked... and yesterday bread is too stale...

    we become envious of our neighbours new house extention cause they are adopting another ophan... when we live alone in a 4 bedroom house.

    many of us are earth criminal cause we knowingly most tims kill what we love most of life, of the human kind, of the animals kind, of the flora kind, our soils, waterways and atmostphere are all dying a slow death... all by the hands of the human kind.... mother nature has never been so cruel... she only spring cleans occasionly... just that sometimes we get in her way... and pay the price... and learn an expensive lesson that brings the best of us down to ground level... to learn the value of ourselves, others and live..

    this earth sadly is to often forgotten by us... rarely do we all band together to give thanks to it... for it the true heart that keeps us alive

  • dlbrown
    February 7, 2006
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    Yes Sir, this really says it all, great write, greater thinking. It is all so true, I haven't eaten meat for 20 years, and been a greenpeacer for almost as long, it makes me happy for this message, this poetic write, to be read..Maybe now things will start to change, maybe. I feel so bad for what will not survive man, but, I do agree the Earth will survive us, and be thankful of that. Wonderfully intellegent!! Diane
  • Jade-Cyr
    February 6, 2006
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    Very well done

    With the earliest history of man, Satan began his efforts
    to deceive our race. He who had incited rebellion in
    Heaven desired to bring the inhabitants of the Earth to
    unite with him in his warfare against the government of
    God. Adam and Eve had been perfectly happy in obedience
    to the law of God, and this fact was a constant testimony
    against the claim which Satan had urged in Heaven, that
    God's law was oppressive and opposed to the good of His
    creatures. And furthermore, Satan's envy was excited as
    he looked upon the beautiful home prepared for the
    sinless pair. He determined to cause their fall, that,
    having separated them from God and brought them under
    his own power, he might gain possession of the Earth
    and here establish his kingdom in opposition to the Most
    High. (Great Controversy, pg. 531). Jade-Cyr.

    There is a battle going on for the minds of men. Everything
    you said is true, but we must get back to the root cause
    of all of this murder, mayhem, and destruction of the
    Earth. Jesus says plainly, "That He will destroy those
    who destroy His Earth." (Rev. 11:18). Jade-Cyr
  • Antipodi
    January 31, 2006
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    AGIANTPOEMOFTRUTH

    Now this poem is very scary and you are obviously very knowledgeable on this subject ..Sadly there are many DEAF ears in the corridors of power and they are blinded by their greed let us hope poems like yours will one day make them listen and Open their eyes to the Obvious before its too late..Good luck in the Competition

  • littleboyblue
    January 20, 2006
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    Im speechless... an incredible masterpiece.
  • myheartisyours
    January 16, 2006
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    fantabulous

    Again you have so much talent!!! You have made the horrible things Of Earth into a beautiful poem!~Sarah

  • ladylyric
    January 9, 2006
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    How inspiring...and informative. I kinda beleive that all the natural disasters are caused by the earth trying to cleanse its'self. Childish? Maybe, but it's a theory that's always got me through my day! Awesome as always!

  • Grieving-Willow
    January 9, 2006
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    Need I say it? Okay I will... This is a masterpiece ... I'm commenting on your pieces like I do my dad, so consider yourself TALENTED... AS if you weren't before ... I must appauld this. And remember, I'm your #1 BIGGEST Fan Love you Sara

  • Watuwant silver member
    January 8, 2006
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    I've always gotten somewhat of a chuckle at hearing people say "save the planet," knowing full well that this planet will save itself, with or without us. Whether it is with us has always been our choice. Thus far, we are choosing horrendously.
    Nice sentiments expressed here, combined with an attractive formatting. Well done, and good luck in the contest.
    peace
    doug

  • Mark Rickerby gold member
    January 6, 2006
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    MuseStalker,

    Yes, it does seem like nature is striking back. It's actually a mystery - how nature balances herself. For instance, if a certain type of animal starts to become too dominant in a particular ecosystem, some malady will usually befall them from out of nowhere to balance out their numbers. Imbalances in nature only occur when people become involved. Human beings have no ecosystem. We dominate the entire earth. But I fear nature is balancing our numbers out the same way it would with some creature that is overpopulating a smaller area. The tsunami in Asia should have been a wake-up call, but I don't see much changing so far.

    Sorry to be so depressing, but I have trouble finding anything positive to talk about when it comes to the environment. When I was a kid, I loved watching nature shows, especially the ones Disney did where they followed one animal around. Remember the ones with the guy with the southern accent narrating? Now every nature show ends on a dire note about dwindling habitat or the animal being poached to the edge of extinction, usually by China for all their primitive, ignorant aphrodisiacs. Someone needs to tell them that it's good health that makes someone sexually virile.

    Did you know that they sell "tiger penis soup" on the black market in China for $500.00 a bowl? The logic is by eating the most masculine part of a powerful animal, the person will be magically endowed with it's strength. Basically the same principle as cannibalism. (Eat your enemy's heart to get his courage, eat his brain to get his wisdom.) Dirt ignorant. It really ticks me off, considering the fact that there's only about 300 tigers left in the wild. Then of course there are elephant foot trash cans and monkey paw ashtrays, also almost always in the Orient.

    I had a long correspondence with the head of wildlife preservation in Taiwan once. He was fighting hard but it was clear that he was losing the battle.

    Thanks for the comment. Always nice to hear from you.

    Mark

  • Mark Rickerby gold member
    January 6, 2006
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    Thanks, Rob. I'm glad you liked this. I hope mankind wakes up before the giant does. Then again, individuals tend to take things for granted until they're gone, or almost gone, so I don't really expect anything more from humanity in general. Fortunately, there are people on the front lines - Greenpeace, Sierra Club, etc., - fighting the people and countries who just don't give a shit about anything but money.

    I hope your new year is going well so far.

    Peace,

    Mark

  • Just Rob gold member
    January 6, 2006
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    This is a very good poem, a great message, and s super presentation. As an activist concerning environmental issues, I'm aware of the ticking clock that mankind has set. I hope many are awoken by this. I would like to see it in all major newspapers.
    Peace, Rob

  • MuseStalker
    January 6, 2006
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    Excellent and very disturbing poem, bud. I love the "sleeping giant" metaphor. I have often thought that Man is a sort of infestation that the earth has born only because we have been no great threat. But, as we have become more harmful to her, it seems Mother Earth is taking umbrage. I agree that we are only beginning to experience her outrage.

    Well done piece....good, timely and well constructed "story".
  • Catressa gold member
    January 5, 2006
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    So many do not know or realise the losses we as a world are facing... Something is wrong when hundreds of whales beach themselves as they did before the Tsunami hit. And as for the Ice Caps nice to see someone else paying attention. Great Write as is the norm for you Mark, Take Care, Catressa

  • Maureen silver member
    January 4, 2006
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    I never would have thought that eating hamburgers (which I don't do, by the way) has anything to do with the destruction of rainforests (which bothers me a great deal). I wish everyone would be as concerned about what is happening as you are. We are already suffering the consequences of thoughtless destruction of our rainforests..I shudder to think of what the future holds for our planet and everyone on it.

    Maureen

  • Mystical-Gardenia
    January 4, 2006
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    Awesome!! Brilliantly written!!

    Magnificent you have taken your gift ever so brilliantly to tout the preverbial handwriting on the wall and ever so eloquently speared the "plunders" of our works It is the lack of concern that has become the rape of our progenies future there will be a song of long lament should this apathy and greed become the constant... our line of descent... our legacy we leave Magnificently written It begins with each one... staking a stance and claim to nurture this planet... Awesome brilliantly written Wishing you and yours a joyous prosperous New Year!!

  • tarnishedheart
    January 4, 2006
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    that first picture is amazing, I have not seen anything like that yet. This was a very good poem, you make alot of good points, keep on fighting and speaking out, it may be the only way to make everyone open thier eyes!

  • Mark Rickerby gold member
    January 3, 2006
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    He sure was. It's important to teach kids respect for life and nature.

    I heard a story once about Clint Eastwood (of all people) on a soundstage with his son, who was about to step on a cockroach. Clint stopped him and said, "He has a place on this earth, too." My opinion of him went up a lot that day.


  • Mark Rickerby gold member
    January 3, 2006
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    I know, I can be a dismal S.O.B. sometimes. lol Sorry about that. Then again, it's hard to write a cheery "social consciousness" poem, though I'm sure something is going right. I can't think of anything right now, but I'm sure something is. lol J/K

    Most people are ostrichish (ostrichish?) about the environment as far as making big changes. But what annoys me is people who don't even recycle, litterbugs, etc., like it's just too much of an inconvenience for them in their busy and important lives. Bastards. (This is one of my pet peeves. Can you tell?. haha)

    I'll write a happy one next time. I promise.

    Mark

  • Vickie J
    January 3, 2006
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    II hate to face the facts-I wanna be that ostrich that hides his head in the sand, you don't see him cuz he can't see you. The facts are very startling and it's inevitable-the world wasn't made to last forever and we hold the proof. I'm just glad my faith lies elsewhere and I have a greater hope.
    Nice job on this Mr. Rickerby. (now I'm off to read some cheery poems......lol)

  • Mark Rickerby gold member
    January 3, 2006
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    Hi 99,

    Here's a page describing desertification -
    pubs.usgs.gov/gip/deserts/desertification

    And here's a more promising article -
    www.china.org.cn/english/environment/131930.htm

    I've always thought that was an amazing quote, too. Da Vinci saw something ugly in human nature, even in his time when the natural world was a lot more intact than it is now, that alarmed him and made him lose hope for our future completely. Unfortunately, his words are coming true. I've been supporting Greenpeace and the Sierra Club for years, but it's never enough. The forces of destruction are so much stronger than the forces of preservation because there's money in plundering and none in leaving the earth alone.

    Thanks,

    Mark


    Edited on Jan 04, 11:30 because ''.
  • Ir.muse
    January 3, 2006
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    This is a great write dear Mark.It shows your kind heart and your concern about the natural disasters as well as unnatural problems in the societies.I wish we come to see a hopeful peaceful world ONE DAY.
    Shahrzad

  • shastadaisey123 silver member
    January 3, 2006
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    Mark, this is so "right on"..I cannot imagine why society refuses to see what we are doing to ourselves....is there an answer? perhaps not...only future generations, if they survive, can answer that question
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