I never thought I could ever feel this close to complete,
this close to happy, this close to okay.
Though we have our ups and downs with life,
it is you that keeps me going, that makes me try.
I love you with every beat of my heart,
and every single breath I take.
You're my smile, and my laughter,
I'd be lost in a sea of loneliness without you.
Everyone thinks I'm crazy,
just because I've held on so long.
Our relationship isn't perfect by no means,
but it's the closest I'll ever get to fairytale.
You're my dream come true,
what I've prayed for each night.
My night and shining armor,
the one that kisses away my pain.
I never thought we'd come this far,
four long years, filled with so much love.
You were there for me when I needed you most,
and I thank you for everything you've done.
I love you
Author notes
I love my boyfriend, so much... It'll be 4 years next month, and it's like, are you serious? hehe.... I'm glad we've made it so far, and that I can for once say, I know what a touch of happiness is... it'll be 10times better when he's actually home though... 
(is currently locked up for something stupid, and will be for a little while longer)...
*Option#2... I love being in love*
Written January 3rd, 2006
In a list
A contest entry
- When I Look Into Your Eyes & Other Options by beautifulbrat.
300 points, ended January 15, 2006, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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this such an emotional poem.. I love the way Love flows out of it and the strenght to carry on, no matter what! good for you and well done for the poem!
HBH -
this is a very good poem, and it shows love towards our fiance. great job!
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Such a sweet poem. This one touched me as well. That's awesome you've been together for 4 years...long time! It's good to be able to feel safe and comforted with someone..isn't it? Just a really nice poem, it made me feel really good.
Love,
Kris -
this poem speaks volume!there will always be a time to feel happy and in love. tears will always turn to smile.^_^ this poem just says it al..
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I LOVE this poem! It gives me hope with my new BF! Good job!!!
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awwww...it gives me hope for real love. great write!!!!
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i like this poem and it drips with love.keep up it up. -
I love poems like this from you. There is so much love, hope and happiness in the tone of this poem and it gives me hope for your future, it gives me hope that you're going to be okay and that does your big sister's heart good ... I love you sis and I wish you nothing less than love and happiness in your life and so much more. You truly deserve it, and if you ever get hurt, you betta tell me, for I'll kick his ass
Seriously, go for the happiness Don't ever let love slip you by 
Sara Dawn
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awesome
A very loving and caring tribute to the man u love and continue to stand by him thru thick and thin. Well written. Take care. Your words are as heartfelt as the love I have for my young man, Louie, who is always away on his government business trips. It's hard but we have to stay strong. -
OMG! You guys are adorable! He's a catch!
lol. This is beautiful. I can tell that you love him very much. You guys remind me a lot of Brent and I!
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really great write
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Beautiful
LaLa, this poem just fills me with happiness; seeing such a beautiful poem with sprinkles of happiness all over it makes me extremely happy for you hon. I remember when I felt exactly like this, except my Prince turned out to be a horny toad 
... so I'm glad you got a good one hon, you deserve all the happiness in the world. 
I love you hun, and good luck in the contest!
♥ Frances Lynn -
this is a great poem this is how i feel about my bf, we are long distance and we broke it off a bouple of days ago
but its still how i feel
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Aaww I'm sorry to hear that he is locked away, but at least you've kept your love strong and stood by your man through thick and thin. i love these stanzas:
"I never thought I could ever feel this close to complete,
this close to happy, this close to okay.
Though we have our ups and downs with life,
it is you that keeps me going, that makes me try.
I love you with every beat of my heart,
and every single breath I take.
You're my smile, and my laughter,
I'd be lost in a sea of loneliness without you."
this describes how i feel about my boyfriend. thank you for entering the contest and good luck!
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awww this is such a sweet poem. i am happy that you found someone that makes you happy. i dont want anymore sadness for you. you deserve this lil piece of heaven. love ya
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Absolutely sweet. I wish for you guys many, many more years together filled with happiness. Thanks for sharing this write. It was a very touching expression of what this very special relationship means to you and I was honored to have the chance to read it. Thanks, James
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brillent!
Truely a sweet and loving poems, I hope that you will merry and have many babies and grow old together, you both deserve it! -
Aww, this is such a sweet poem. I'm sorry that he got locked up. But it's great that you are standing by him and that no matter what people say, you still love him and you always will. This is a beautiful poem and I wish I could relate. Parts of it I can about a guy that I like, but not the relationship part. I wish you and your guy the best and all the happiness in the world with amazing luck. great job. Keep it up.
~Midnite Rae
[the morbid mistress]
aka:Marissa Rae -
beautiful
aww wow this is beautiful. im sorry to hear he got locked up hun and good on u for standing by him and standing by love rather than wat people may think n say n do. i envy that alot. i wish u all the luck and happiness in the world. gl in contest hun. kat xx
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