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Drunk Driving

That day started out as any other,
It was finally my day out,
Just me and my brother,
He knew what drinking was all about.

We went to the first bar we saw,
He had one drink after another,
I knew he was gonna break the law,
I never knew my heart was gonna tear.

After we left we drove down the dark rode,
he speed really fast,
to drunk to know what was going to happen,
He was never like this in the past,
My heart he was going to ruin.

Up ahead I saw the truck,
I told him to hit the brake,
but he was to drunk,
I felt my body begin to shake.

We hit the truck hit really hard,
And I'll I remember
Was laying there
Then i looked over at my brother,
And i knew he was hurt,
I could tell by the blood on his shirt,

The doctor said they had done all they could,
as i realized he was gone for good,
My eyes filled with tears,
I remembered what we went through all these years.

Now he is six feet under the dirt,
I wish he was still alive,
Now you know what happens,
when you drink and drive.

Author notes

***THIS IS A TRUE STORY IT HAPPEN 2 YRS AGO I SHOULD HAVE NOT LET HIM DRIVE BUT INSTEAD I DID AND THATS WHTA COSTED HIM HIS LIFE BECAUSE HE DRANK AND DROVE****
Written January 3rd, 2006

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  • loveXcorpse
    January 4, 2006
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    awwww.thats really sad that it happened to you...but this was an amazing poem
    -GIR-