Everything so warm, yet I watch and shiver.
Everyone so happy, yet I so sad.
These tears like acid, burn my eyes.
This lump in my throat, grows ever more prominent.
You said you luved me, Never loved, yet you said I was everything to you, even your second soul.
I was so happy, thinking I would finally see you, after so long apart.
It's been 6 days, yet feels like years.
I call for you, but you reply 'come hither'.
You are not bothered to come to me.
You only want to see me if I come to you.
You tell me I'm the best, and you ask if I'm OK.
You tell me you don't want to let me go.
You make it sound as though you have to.
Even though I may be angered at your unwillingness, I love you, and want to be with you forever!
Please never leave me!
Thoughts are chaotically running through my mind.
Confusion at what your words are saying.
Tell me you love me, please, at least once!
Just in case I mistake your meaning, and let myself go from you.
Please don't make me leave.
Just tell me those simple words.
Make sure you mean them.
I don't want to end up like my mother, I want to be happy.
Only say them if you can make me happy.
You are my dream come true.
If you don't love me deeply, you may only see me again in dream, floating on a fluffy, golden cloud.
Don't leave me sitting here, cold, lonely, and sobbing.
Come and rescue me.
Take me in your arms.
Love me tonight.
Show me this love is forever!
Author notes
This is just something I wrote on my phone.. its true.. it kinda needs a bit of editing, and its not very good, but it was just something quick.... Pudding is Yummy!! = D Op2!
Written January 1st, 2006
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this is hopeful and pesiamistic at the same time...i havent quite figured that out yet but thats my intial reaction to this it is good...and i like your word choice...i want you to remember something actions always speak louder than words...do not be caught up in someone that says one thing and acts another way...trust your instincts...anyway good job
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aww hunni this is sooo sad but its an excellent write. i think we all experss our emotions through poems which makes a write like this so much more special.i think its fantastic and you should keep up the good work!
love ya
lil k
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