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Cold

Cold inside
Not because of temperature
But because of loss of feeling
Need to feel alive again
Or shall die heartless
No passion left
Only coldness
No heat
Only a freezing feeling
Need to feel alive again
Or I fear I shall lose sight of who I am

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Written January 3rd, 2006

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  • baby candy abc
    January 3, 2006
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    that is a wonderful line....these are old ones that have wrote in the past few weeks....no net....

  • RalphL
    January 3, 2006
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    Light a fire or Spark a flame gee I wish I can do the same. With everything in your world so cold its hard to find a light down that road. Don't lose sight of who you are and remember you're never to far from.freedom's hold.