Just two masses moving closer, that happen to meet
No friction between us, but somehow there's heat
It's our own simple way, to stay as pure as our love
Our hands slide into each other's, they fit like a glove
I pull you in close, if to never let you go
You're the light of my life, at such radiance we glow
Gliding together, we merge in each other's arms
I feel your heart beat, as it races like an alarm
The fire steadily builds, as we lay motionless
Your heart grows calmer, as I hold you against my chest
Your body is pressed, firmly against mine
This feeling dreamt of, since the beginning of time
As our warmth continuously comforts my soul
I think this moment, and how you make me whole
To lock us in this moment, we pull up the bed sheet
sent to fanciful dreams, from our sweet blissful heat
Author notes
NOT SEXUAL! I was aiming for a non-sexual way to express love. Cuddling is so much healthier and safer, and I personally think it has more meaning then sex does. but...whatever.
Just ignore the commas if you want to. I placed them to give the reader the sense of pace that I origionally intended.
Written January 3rd, 2006
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This is great... and I think it's sweet how you intended it. Great write and good luck in the contest.
Lots oof love*
RLL -
Love it
If thats a short poem I need to srart writeing more lol, but indeed it was very romantic and loving. -
wow this was absolutly beautiful, at first i veiwed it as sexual because of the title and being in the love section, but the poem described for me the loving part of a relationship, the part that every relationship must have in order to work, your poem is awesome and if this poem describes ur current life i hate u lol jk im just envious of such a meaningful thing that u have, i assume u have it thou b/c the write was so awesome that only true feeling could of put those words together
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Wow this is beautiful. I can see every movement happening!
And I love the rhyme scheme! There is so much love and passion here without sex! I love it! Cuddling is the best really! Of course I do love an occasional... what cuddling leads up to... if you know what I mean. lol. I have a suggestion... it's a little more erotic than this but there is a poem you may enjoy.... it's called Painted.
allpoetry.com/Poem/1692854
Check it out sometime and let me know what you think. Great job on this! I really enjoyed it!
AManda -
cuddling is fun...and the poem reflects that well... i enjoyed the read! good luck!
Kat -
Well done!
This is good, I love to cuddle! -
This is an awesome poem...and I full heartedly agree, sex is over rated and is too exploited....
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nice
The first verse was breathtaking, although line 6
"at such radiance we glow" left me a bit confused. Did you really, thoughtfully mean that line (like being transparent and having the light fill you and pass you, thus, you glow?) or did you mean "in such radiance, we glow"? "At" refers to because of such ("at what point do we stop?" for example) -
Fantasic
Wow, this poem is amazing. You did an awesome job.
Great. keep them comming!
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mouse, I didn't take sexual from, only an almost blissful and happy love between two that have something very special. to me it seemed as if it were a beginning. good write image and Visions
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this is a very nice write. Very well written and the description is just superb. Great write and keep on writting
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Sometimes sex just muddles things up, and the cuddling is fun too - liked this write of yours, comfortable and easy reading...
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You expressed well!!! Though not what I would classify as a 'short' poem, it certainly captured the feeling you were going after!!!!!!!!
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The first verse was breathtaking, although line 6
"at such radiance we glow" left me a bit confused. Did you really, thoughtfully mean that line (like being transparent and having the light fill you and pass you, thus, you glow?) or did you mean "in such radiance, we glow"? "At" refers to because of such ("at what point do we stop?" for example) -
Amazing
Wow, i really love this, its got great rhyme and a really great beat, it's got alot of emotion in it, i love this one, keep up the good writing, and good luck in the contest, hope you win! -
This has good rhyme and good flow.. i like this, it's what do you call it, blissful.. yeah.. that
best of luck
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woah, this is beautifull, incredibly written. and although u didnt intend it to be sexual, just the closeness your have decsribed in this creates a spark when u read it. this is really powerfull and im really impressed
keep writing
Alpha - Omega -
excellent
wow! This is an amazing poem. You wrote it so well and the imagery was perfect! I loved the format of the poem as well, it gave it a great flow. The topic you chose isn't a common one, I myself agree with you that cuddling is more meaningful than a physical relationship. Reach for the stars and never stop writting, you'll go really far!
Much love,
Shanna -
hey this is pretty good, very sweet. it dose have a sense of peace! Great job and good luck in the contest
goodbyebye<3
angie -
wow.. just wow, thank you so much for the link. I really like this piece, how you arragned it, and how it flows. Dont stop writing. Best of luck in the contest
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