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Internet Love in Many Forms

 






Sweet and Lyrical Villanelle

 

Sweet and Lyrical does Net love dwell
It shines within our hearts sublime
Is that the ringing of silver bells?

 

Soft and tender is its spell
Like sunshine in the summertime
Sweet and Lyrical Net love dwells.

 

Hearts will be black, some minds a shell
Yet pierced they can be with love genuine
Is that the ringing of silver bells?

 

Thoughts deep as an artesian well
Be warned- it will hurt most of the time
Sweet and Lyrical Net love dwells.

 

Most days will be a living hell
It’s certainly not a victimless crime
Is that the ringing of silver bells?

 

It is now woven into our unsuspecting lives
Would you like to be my partner in crime?
Sweet and Lyrical Net love dwells
Is that the ringing of silver bells?





 

Heed This Broken Sonnet

 

Light-hearted was the Villanelle above.
Have I forgotten the darkness in the rain?
Or the agonizing, aching, numbing pain?
Do I naively dwell on the happier side of love?
Confound it all! There is more to love than bliss!
Hard work it takes, you must remember this!
Much pain and sorrow from life’s uncertainties
they’ll knock you out and bring you to your knees!
Is it better to run from Internet romance
and the bewitching words from sources yet unseen
who claim to be Kings when they’re really Queens?
When all they want to do is unzip your pants?
Tread carefully when you delve in such romance.
So heed these Sonnet’s words, then grab this happiness...!





 

Love Triolet- a Quadratic Tragedy on the Inside-Out of Love

 


Created here with word and pen
so dark and light, Net love binds
pictures, sound, and video, sure, but
created here with word and pen.
Net love is real, though most maligned
you’ll know the person first inside.
Created thus with word and pen
So dark, yet light. Net love binds.

 


When created here with word and pen
and knowing the person first inside
add pictures, sound, video, and see beyond
what is created here with word and pen.
To see the person unrehearsed
you’ll get to know their thin outside.
When created here with word and pen
you’ll know the person first inside.

 


So dark and light, Net love binds.
You’ll see the person unrehearsed.
It’s very real, though most maligned.
Net love is real, Net love binds.
Hearts and minds can hurt or grow
Net love is blessed or can be cursed.
So dark. So light. Yet it binds.
You'll see the person unrehearsed.

 


For me? I’ll take the inside-first.
The outside-first? I’ll leave to you!
So dark and light, Net love binds.
For me? I’ll take the inside first.
You can see the person unrehearsed.
The inside first? AP is the rule.
the outside first? myspace’s the tool.
I’ll take the inside-first, thank you.
The outside-first? I’ll give to you!






A Diamond in the Rough of Net Love

 

heart
and the mind
not the physical
are perfectly real here
words so silent
piercing our
lives


 





A Haiku of Love Currents

 


Hearts and minds flutter
finding electric rainstorms
through the Internet






A Cinquain Love in Cyberspace

 

Cyberspace
real, unreal
addictive, fulfilling, interacting
reaching farther with feelings long buried
Infobahn






A Limerick of Internet Love

 

There once was a newbie to Internet love
she was pounced on by poetic romantic doves
     she believed everything she read
     and was left torn to shreds
of which she was most undeserving of.






 

An Abstract World of Reaching Out into the Wide Webs of Love

 

The desire to resurrect dead hearts from micro-acoustic torments
via quartz-timed liquid levels of dense waves
that are numerically quantified, frozen, and hand-carved
in association with dermatomyositis-triggered passive disorders
can lead to one to dispense low-level exposures of Internet Love,
resulting in warm flashes and the relief of much suppressed pain 
that travels the gravel roads of the data highway
from said dormant hearts back to you,
and over the sea of hope spring baguette diamonds
that form the shapes of hearts set in engagement rings.

 

 

 

 

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Written January 3rd, 2006

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  • Synchronicity gold member
    September 7

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    A trip to the museum and the wise man

    There is so much wisdom within these words of variable format. It's like a museum of poetic forms. With a dizzy head, I reel from form to form with the same message emphasized and it's a dance and coaster ride right before my eyes. Your smooth flow from each poetric type is remarkable. If I worn a hat, I'd take it off to you. Yet the beauty in forms almost surpasses the wisdom of the message. It's like looking at a painting that is so engrossing in its colors, strokes, mastery of detail, that you almost forget to stand back and recognize the subject. I'm glad that's an "almost", because the subject here is so pertinent to every one of us who writes. We give our heart and soul to our work (or at least expose it), and it is natural for emotions of love to follow. We develop false-security in the virtual world, and believe the outside world can't get in. Like you have said, we can really set ourselves up to get hurt, and, geeze, do we ever really know who we can trust? Not with heart and soul wide open.

    So, I'm rambling on like this basically just to thank you for writing this piece (these pieces). For the beauty and mastery of form that it displays, and for the truth and wisdom in the subject it displays. I have learned so much from it, about poetry and about life.


  • wbiro gold member
    January 18, 2006
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    thanks, do, sorry to see things became a bit too much for you in that arena... come to think of it they did for me too, as I had a nervous breakdown when I first delved into romantic relations here!


  • dark-idle-pixie
    January 9, 2006
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    quite insightful..


  • January 3, 2006
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    Perfection on display!

    Okey! This is so good, I will learn from here! The different forms of poetry and how to write them! Way too perfect and so excellent, I have to print them and read it again and again. This is a talent my brother, you are ahead of the race and uncontrollable! No one can catch up to you~ I know you are way too smart and that I have to pay more attention and more concentration when all of us will meet in the battleground of chess! Ride on brother, all the forms, are very pleasant so lovely to read, flawless and just incredible!
    Jack Felder gave you 5 thumbs up, and I noticed I have only 2 thumbs so I will give you 2 thumbs, so I will give you 2 thumbs up!
    Wonderful poetry, purely spectacular! Good work, brother tomerick! meooooooooooooowwwwwwww

  • Molly Densmore silver member
    January 3, 2006
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    OMG,, you really went all out on this one, excellent!!! very insightful and true. And why do I ask you know so much of internet romance???? LOL... This is so a great collection, a wonderful and beautiful different ways to explain or tell about internet love and the feelings involved and maybe the feelings that should not be there getting involved with such a romance. I am in awe of this. Superb and outstanding, much talent run through you pen, my friend!!!


  • whispersoftly
    January 3, 2006
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    first of all wow! this is amazing all of the different forms in one write, love the way it all flows into one and all makes sense together well done honey this excellant xx

  • wbiro gold member
    January 3, 2006
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    thanks, jack, I'll have to go over it again to see just what I wrote, as I had this one around for a while, and I'm too tired to read it now! and thanks for all the thumbs up! five! wow! lol Maybe you could use this as a springboard to a further insightful write! Let me know, as different viewpoints and experiences all help us to see reality!


  • Myth Of Twilight
    January 3, 2006
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    vary good nun the less

    im a little lost but its good i must amite but with some of it i dissagree i give you 5 thums up nun the less

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