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Shut Up

Shut.
The.
Fuck.
Up.

Shut.
The.
Hell.
Up.

Shut
Up!!

I can't seem to escape
Your endless prattling!
"Oh, woe is me
Forever lost in my self-pity!"

Shut up!
Shut up!
Shut up!
Shut up!

Nobody cares!
Nobody gives a fuck!
Stop it you damned Emo idiot!
If it's so bad, stop it yourself!

You have the power
Don't bullshit me with this
"I can't! I can't! I can't!"
YES YOU CAN

"Oh, woe is me
Forever lost in my self-pity!"
Stop it!
Stop it!

I hate it!
Why are you so sad?
Why
Why do you think we care?

I once did
I once had a heart for you
Oh, yes I did
But you killed it

Yes you did
Don't act like you didn't
You wore out your welcome
With your senseless bitching

So
 Do
   Us
     All
        A
         Favor...

Shut.
The.
Fuck.
Up.

It isn't that hard
Just close your mouth
Tightly
And don't open it

Or better yet
Do what you *almost* did
Cut yourself. Remember:
"It's across the street, not down the road"

And so
I dedicate this rant
To you, only you
You deserve it...



You depressed little ninny Emo.

Author notes

If there was a category for Hate, this would go in it.
Written January 2nd, 2006

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  • flowerystone0
    July 6, 2006
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    Oh my Gaaaaaaaaaaawwwwd! This so reminds me of somebody I know now!! I found myself telling him " You're so pathetic you can't even kill yourself right" but ya know, that really makes us the bad person. Even though IT cries all the time, IT'S life is miserable, and nothing but death could possibly make IT feel better, IT has chosen you to ask for help, so...being the wonderful, upstanding, smart, and giving human being that you are, you should try to listen, and always care.. just a little. hmmm?

  • flame of the forest
    February 19, 2006
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    WOW......I LOVE IT....I live you r simple and straight forward style....it actually seems like putting your angry message in the form of a poem, which does'nt lose its way in painted words...its so cool.specially the para...
    I once did
    I once had a heart for you
    Oh, yes I did
    But you killed it

    great write!!! keep it up!!


  • My Girl
    January 4, 2006
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    hmm... i wonder if you like them emo kids?? bishaboo i feel your madness in this poem, and i mean angryness not like crazyness cause if you wer crazy then i'd tell you because i care about you that much and friends of crazy people have interventions to try and help their crazy friend, but your not crazy in that way, your crazy in a good way... but im rambling im sorry


  • Smuh Akers
    January 3, 2006
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    woa hun... ;

  • nutsoap
    January 2, 2006
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    well i really liked this one..i love to tell people to shut the fuck up too.i think i got the whole picture
    i once had a heart for you, but you killed it
    not word for word, but that was great


  • January 2, 2006
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    i feel the hate...now you got me mad lol
    it really is ridicolous to pity yourself for such a long period of time...it makes no sense actually and i believe that eventually you have to life your life to the fullest...otherwise whats the point?
    great work...keep penning poet

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