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Chemical Rain (working title)

[verse1]
Sit in my car and
wait for the night.
It comes on so slowly,
rising like the tides.
You were the one that
watched the stars burst
through the sky.
Taking all them with you
when you said goodbye

[chorus]
Chemical rain
you're my reflection
I can't go on without you
You're a part of me
Chemical rain
you're my addiction
I can't go on when you're
apart from me
apart from me

[verse2]
You left me standing there,
crying in the cold.
You were the one that said
our love would never go.
It took off then
like a shooting star.
Now at night I lay
and wonder where you are.

[chorus]
Chemical rain
you're my reflection
I can't go on without you
You're a part of me
Chemical rain
you're my addiction
I can't go on when you're
apart from me
apart from me

[verse3]
Take me back home then
when the night is through
There isn't anything
else I can do.
The sky is getting bright now
and the clouds are moving in.
Looks like it's time
to start raining again.

[chorus]
Chemical rain
you're my reflection
I can't go on without you
You're a part of me
Chemical rain
You're my addiction
I can't go on when you're
apart from me
apart from me

Author notes

This is kind of a collaboration song thinger with Kayla [loveable cherub]
Updated.... Got a second verse (is that ok, Kay?) I'm not sure if I like a bridge with it. We'll see.
Written January 2nd, 2006

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  • Loveable Cherub
    January 3, 2006
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    I <3 Scott. [im scotts strawberry! ^_^] says:
    HOW COME YOU DIDN'T COMMENT ON OUR COLLABERATION!
    I <3 Scott. [im scotts strawberry! ^_^] says:
    crap head.
    I know this hurts -- It was meant to says:
    uhm what am is upposed to say about it?
    I <3 Scott. [im scotts strawberry! ^_^] says:
    i don't know
    I <3 Scott. [im scotts strawberry! ^_^] says:
    that we fuckin rock?
    I know this hurts -- It was meant to says:
    oh ok
    I <3 Scott. [im scotts strawberry! ^_^] says:
    (LC)