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Beauty And The Beast

I’m Just A Puppet
Held Up With Your Strings
And You’ve Got Me Dancing
The Whole World Can See

I’m Just A Slave
Chained And Bound To Your Hate
I’m On My Knees
And Left In The Rain

I’m Just A Doll
For You To Toy With
You’ve Got Me Dressed In Rags
Cracked And Broken, You Don’t Care

Giving In,
I’ll Be Your Silent Slut.

Tainted Soul,
Tear Streaked Cheeks.

Beauty And The Beast.

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Written January 2nd, 2006

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  • Divina love
    February 19, 2007
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    very emotional write, i simply loved everything down to your choice of words.

    Love D.L.


  • Mad1321
    September 24, 2006
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    Very nice. I liked it a lot. Yes, after a few years I am back. I doubt you remember me, butI'm still here. Anyways, the whole poem is a very good write. It's short and to the point, but still gives some detail and conveys emotion. Good job

  • BreakingxThexHabit
    June 28, 2006
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    Whoa! this piece was postively beautiful! The phrases were incredible and I loved the way you ended it! Great write. Keep it up!

    Isabel


  • Haunted Doll
    March 22, 2006
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    That was excellent. i adore the blunt message and rage. well done.

  • XBrittanyX
    March 8, 2006
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    AMAZING!! That was a truly brilliant write! In an odd sense of things I can somewhat relate to this. I hope to read more awesome writes from you! You are a talented writer!


  • MeaninglessGaze
    January 2, 2006
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    very good

    very well written.. i like how each stanza starts similar

  • YourWordsBurn
    January 2, 2006
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    Gorgeous

    That was great, and the ending was unexpected but conclusional. That is one of the better pieces of writing I have seen, and I am in love with the ending. Please keep writing. This had a very nice rhythem to it even though not many rhymes.


  • Alkalescent Days
    January 2, 2006
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    Oh my GOODNESS!I -heart- this piece of writing!Whee! Great write.


  • xSallyxDollx
    January 2, 2006
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    Wow this was twisted, distorted and genreally messed up from what the title offers - you did a great job!!!! Seriously you looked past everything and shown how it can relate to what can happen. This poem actually reminded me about a lot of my past relationships. Great job this completely blew my mind! Keep up the awesome work!!


  • ShadowStalker
    January 2, 2006
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    Was this about you being a puppet, or there's just an ugly side of things? This was certainly interesting and it did say something to me, well several things actually. Great write and I hope more people will comment on this for you.

    Tainted Soul,
    Tear Streaked Cheeks.

    I really liked those two lines for some reason. LOL

    Schmitty

  • Vampiric Fox Demon
    January 2, 2006
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    Wow. Amazing poem. The emotion is so powerful. I love how it's Beauty and The Beast, very interesting thing to compare really. (Not the right words but whatever.) Well, keep on writing!

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