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White pastoral

Many trees line the streets
each house so warm,
windows like eyes,
all doors are
closed.

Curtains like a theatre
of lights and shadows
are keeping voices
showing us only
shivering
figures.

Snow on the dark branches,
frozen wintry blanket,
in imposture to be
diamonds.

Birds under the eaves.
Bristled bodies
are whispering
soft lullaby
with beaks
under the
wings.

Evening.
My Street under
the silvery and mystic lights.
Crystal field between me and home.
Frozen grass is whispering
snappy song under my
lonesome footstep.
White pastoral.

Author notes

Many trees line the streets
each house so warm,

ST: allpoetry.com/Contest/1730666

Written January 2nd, 2006

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  • Sonja
    January 11, 2006
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    Thank you. This is not a verses. this is a real place where I live with my magic winter muse.
    ~Sonja~


  • Puppydog gold member
    January 11, 2006
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    VERY BEAUTIFUL!

    What a beautiful place you have described here. I could picture it in my mind as I read each beautiful word


  • Sonja
    January 2, 2006
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    I am glad you like it Jasmine. You are always so kind with your comments and applause. Thank you.
    ~Sonja~


  • jasminerose
    January 2, 2006
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    Outstanding

    This is a wonderful poem written with imagery and style! Beautifully written Sonja! A outstanding write!! Best wishes in the contest!!!! Jasmine

  • heart on sleeve
    January 2, 2006
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    lovley wintery feel to this and with your own unique style making it even more delightful lol abigailxx

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