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My Love, My Hate...

What are these emotions?
Something tugging on my heart with a sick notion.
My eye's flooding fill the ocean.
I knew I'd die today.
Part of my sick notion.
Your Love was thick, my sweet potion.

Your lips so tempting, always lured me in.
Yet your my deadly sin.
I could feel it within.

Your my baby but, my demon.
You killed me slowly, eat your own semen.

You don't care,
You wasn't there.
This isn't fair.
Where's my share?

Your My baby, my demon.
My Love and hate.
Either way my heart won't forget,
The comfort of your arms wrapping me tight,
The way your voice made my heart fly away,
When you'd say I love you beautiful.
It also won't forget the screaming and tears.
I'll forget you this year....

This is my closure...
This is my Good-Bye.




     









                 Jan.1.06
              ~*~ Baby & Beautiful ~*~

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Written January 2nd, 2006

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  • mee219
    January 3, 2006
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    This is a great poem, I like the imagery, and the metaphors. It has great flow, and the background compliments it very well. I like it a lot, as with most of you poetry. Keep writing, you have a lot of talent.



    Jeff


  • xshotxinxthexheartx
    January 2, 2006
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    that is really awesome, and i know what you mean, you're my poison and my antidote....i know exactly what you mean