I'm left thinking about you
Pondering what could have been
My heart feels as if it won't last
Its going to burst from heartache
Just the other day you said those words
The most precious three words
Now its over and I'm lost in those letters
Forever scarred from your love
You are sketched into my past
Memories of your words so sweet
I want you to come back and tell me again
The want in my heart won't let me stop
The tears creep up on me now
Silently sliding down my face
They are unstoppable at this point
Forever you left me for my own
I can't stop thinking about you
No matter how hard I try
Always In the front of my mind
Why can't I move on now
This hurts so bad and it won't go away
My heart can't take this pain any longer
I want You to say you Love me again
I want you to Miss me
Everywhere I look it brings me back to you
I remember when my heart jumped
When you made me smile
When Everything was OK and I was content
You are sketched into my past
Memories of your words so sweet
I want you to come back and tell me again
The want in my heart won't let me stop
Forever You remain as a part of me
Something That you gave up
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Idk. I hate writing a Love poem about this. Its kinda weird.
Written January 2nd, 2006
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wow i love this poem! and i can definatly relate! i hav been though alot of heart break sumtimes it was more serious then others but all the more i hav experienced wat u r talkin bout but trust me it will get better u just gotta hang in there! awesome poem and keep it up! <3ame
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I loved how "You are sketched into my past
Memories of your words so sweet
I want you to come back and tell me again
The want in my heart won't let me stop" was a repeat.
When writers do this it brings out a prominence in the subject they are describing and what they feel holds great importance. I also like "I want You to say you Love me again
I want you to Miss me" how you capitalized the Y in You, the L in Love and the M in Miss. That also shows great emotion, but doesnt distract the reader at all.
Heartbreak is truly horrid and hard to write the feelings down and make sense to anyone who isn't involve or isn't experiencing the pain. Very good write! I hope you overcome or overcame this, though love is really hard to get over when it gets slammed back in your face.
Also, thank you for the comment on my piece!
Sensational and very refreshing to read!
Much luck in future relationships, and I hope your writing keeps up the magic that it has portrayed here.
CherityAmber -
Good Write. What happened?
~mystic
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Wow...hmm..I was really messed the other night. I had to just let it all out, now i ended up with that. I guess its ok, I'm over him and all now and its interesting to see how i was.lol.
Faith Trust and Pixie Dust -
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aww this is very sad
i felt this way after my bf broke up wit me after 9 months
and he wen t for my friend
it sucked really bad
i didnt know wat to do
but write
it helped alot
keep up the good work
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