I know I left too much mess
Won't you come see about me?
I'll go where secrets are sold
In my field of paper flowers
lying on the floor I’ve come undone
I can't seem to make you mine
I could be an accident but I'm still trying
I really wanna make you mine
I wanna hold you and love you
I've tried so hard to tell myself that you're gone
will you be able to tell me sorry with a straight face
I’m all out of faith, this is how I feel
I’m broken when I’m lonesome
I want you back
I don’t feel right when your gone away
Living to give you love
But it looks like I'm still on my own
Just to hear you say that you love me
So I'll do anything or go anywhere
And I'm gonna love you like nobody loves you
I would do anything thing for you
all I care about is you and me and us and now
Author notes
don't ya just hate when love doesn't work out the way you plan??
banana phone
ok in order
Dido - I'm no Angel
Tears for Fears- Don't you Forget about me
Katy Rose- Lemon
Evanescence- Imaginary
Weezer- Sweater song
Ramones- can't seem to make you mine
Fallout Boy - Grand Theft Autumn
Jet- Are you gonna be my girl
Hanson- If Only
Evanescence- My Immortal
Fallout Boy- Patron Saint of Lairs and Fakes
Natalie Imbruglia-Torn
Seether- Broken
N Sync-I want you back
Seether-Broken
Faith Hill- just to hear you say
Fallout Boy- Saturday
Faith Hill-Just to hear you say
O Town- All for love
Keith Urban- Makin Memories of Us
Keith Urban- I wanna be your everything
Hanson- If Only
a bit choppy i must admit, well im sorry
Written January 2nd, 2006
A contest entry
- this could be interesting.... by Smuh Akers.
812 points, ended January 14, 2006, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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Very cool. By the way, "Simple Minds" sings Don't you forget about me. =)
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beautifully done, I think it is well put together and flows very nicely.
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Except N Sync
Peace <3
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aw well thanks! yea most of the bands i used I like alot.. accually all of the bands i like alot
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Going through this poem I thought I recognized some of the lines
Then when I read your author comments and the contest criteria I realised why. All the lyrics seemed to go well and fit in with the poem. Oh yeah and I really like some of the bands that you used. 
Sweet. Peace <3
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thanks so much!
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thanks!!
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AWESOME!!!!
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*claps* Bravo!
Good luck in the contest, Torie!
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I like this one ver much torie, well done ^_^
sami
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