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A Toast

The gentle wave may kiss the shore
Butterflies kiss roses forevermore
Bubbling champagne may kiss the glass
But you dear friend don't kiss my lass.

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Written January 1st, 2006

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A contest entry

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  • Little Eagle Greeters member
    July 23, 2008
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    Thank you for your entry

    lol, cute, I could think of another last line that would work, but that would require a slight curse word lol.

    Good job ont he form, nice flow, good rhyme scheme.

    I encourage you to keep writing to read and comment.

    God Bless
    Tammy