It’s your birthday once again
Now you are one year older, Morgan
This day only comes once a year
Let's have some fun so get out the beer
Let's call all your friends and have a party
Sam, Robert, Luke, and even Marty
It’ll be fun, us all being together
Let’s just hope that there will be good weather
So just sit back and rest
This party will be the best
You’ll get lots of gifts from everyone
Let’s just hope no one gets you a gun
I hope you have a very Happy Birthday
I hope its fun in every possible way
You are now officially one year older
Let’s just hope the weather doesn’t get colder
Author notes
Definately not one of my best, but I wanted to try. I haven't written a rhyming piece in a while and rhyming isn't my style, but after that first stanza I kinda had to continue. Marz, I might try writing a better one for your contest. 
Written January 1st, 2006
In a list
A contest entry
- Birthday for blood-wolf by purplebubbles.
300 points, ended January 12, 2006, 2 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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scanning through old bookmarked poems i meant*
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Hehe, and im still with him to this very day [making it one year and 4 months were together]
Thanks! i was just.scaring through old book marked poems..ehh good times.
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WONDERFUL POEM
Congratulations on the Bronze. Awesome poem. Take care, God Bless you. Sandy
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Very Good
He he! That was cute if I had some sparkeling grape juice and cake I would have to say I was throwing a party. -
hahaha! nice one... yis im supposed to write one too... hmmm...
this is great.... the rhyming did seem kinda forced at some places... but i least u tried *i wouldnt b brave enough too
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Lmfao..the last lines were the BEST wow....I don't know why, they just really ....really made me laugh. Ok not that much, as you are online right now..why the heck is the comment box getting larger?! ..anyway, as you are listneing to me right now typing. Mhmm.
Great poem! I think she'll like it (this largening of the comment box makes me NOT want to write a large comment.)
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