Mommy, I'm sorry,
I'm sorry I lied,
And mommy, I'm sorry,
I'm sorry I died,
But you’re the one that caused it,
Yes, you caused all that pain,
You made my tears,
Fall like rain.
You thought I was stronger,
You thought I’d make it through,
But I died there,
In that hospital room,
With my throat cut and bleeding,
They couldn’t save my life,
And you’ll carry on living,
With my death on your mind,
‘Cause now you know you did this,
It will follow you around,
It won’t leave you alone,
It will drag you to the ground.
But Mommy, I’m sorry,
I’m sorry I never tried,
And mommy, I’m sorry…
I’m sorry I died.
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Written January 1st, 2006
A contest entry
- I am sorry by XxConfusedXx.
350 points, ended January 4, 2006, 20 entries
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this was very well written, it sounds so good because you finish where you started if you get me. The subject is very sad, but i can understand it,and its a tough subject to write about, but this just shines through! Great job, loves you huni
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wow this was very deep but i liked it alot great job
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Awwwww so sad!
But extremly well written.
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